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Silent child,standing alone in the darkness,
only a shadow to the world,
only one piece of life.
Silent child,
dreaming,
waking,
walking,
sleeping.
No one knows,
No one cares,
No one wishes to know or care.
Silent child,
wishing to hear,
wishing to be heard,
wishing to be known.
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Comments: 6
ALBDreamweaver [2012-10-05 03:38:44 +0000 UTC]
I like it alot. Is the child mute too, since that seems to be inferred...
You do the whole "isolation" theme really, really well, though, I must say.
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babynips99 In reply to ALBDreamweaver [2012-10-05 03:40:30 +0000 UTC]
thank you the child is mute.
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ALBDreamweaver In reply to babynips99 [2012-10-05 04:08:18 +0000 UTC]
That explains that.
Still love it.
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babynips99 In reply to ALBDreamweaver [2012-10-05 13:08:48 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. We're singing a song in choir about someone deaf speaking their thoughts, so that kind of gave me the idea to write this poem.
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ALBDreamweaver In reply to babynips99 [2012-10-05 14:26:42 +0000 UTC]
It's certainly an interesting idea, and an enjoyable work.
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