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Published: 2012-09-30 17:57:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 103; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Who could love her?Who could want her?
Why her?
Not me?
Why is she so great?
Why does everyone love her?
Why her?
Not me?
Why am I alone?
Why is she surrounded?
I was here first,
not her.
Why was I left?
Replaced by her?
What did I do wrong?
What can I do,
to make it better?
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Comments: 13
Heh. It's great. It really is, it gives off the "isolation" vibe pretty nicely.
Just remember, though, both genders can feel that way
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I'm not exactly sure how a male would feel, so i did one about a girl.
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It feels about the same
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It is very beautiful. I absolutely love it. GAH and it gave me an idea for an art creation incorporating the poem *.* lol. That is soooo how I feel sometimes too, especially when it came to my ex XD keep up the good work!!
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thanks so much! i'd like to see what art you could come up using my poem! let me know what you come up with
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I definatly will since I have permission to do so. XD I never make things from someone else's work without it.
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just be sure to give me credit if you do so
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[link] I put your name right into the art. I know it's not much but simple was the best way to go with the emotion of the poem
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you have permission to use any of my poems
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