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boisson des sorcieres ©belladonna
aconite
henbane
sweet draughts of poison
from ornate goblet
smoldering scents fill
the invisible spaces
consume you shall
of her wytches brew
by the darkened light
of voided moon
spin circles of egress
spiders silky touch
within enchanted web
the priestess' blackberry lips
wet with nightshade
for her kiss of deathless bliss
Comments: 6
Cultis Sabbati. Bah, rather not go there, with the parallel to strict hereditary traditions closed to reincarnates and such, so biased.
Although the poem is nice. Expansion on it, yes? My criticism isn't the greatest, apologies.
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are you familiar with (or heard of) the occultist Andrew Chumbley and his Cultis Sabbati praxis? it is to this current in which i am referring to...as well as the book Viridarium Umbriis: The Pleasure-garden of Shadows.
I am glad you enjoyed the poem and thank you for your comments!
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It's a well written piece, the herbs mentioned go well with it, though...Your comparison's to Witchcraft seems awfully biast and onesides inclined to evil... expecialy your comment regarding the Sabats. Make me wonder if you fully know what your talking about.
I like the work, it's done well. And I won't deny that because of what it's about, I can still reconize art and good work in subjects I may not fully like what they talk about.
Well done.
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P.S. probably should have relized(asked) this early... what sect(donomination, belifes, practices, etc) are you refering to when you say 'Sabbatic'? Because I may have just gone on that rant thinking of the complete wrong thing... so I realize I should have found this out first, so I apologize for that previous comment if I was completly wrong in what I thought you were originaly meant..
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