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blobofgoo — First Haiku
Published: 2007-11-06 14:58:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 217; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description
Blue-grey glowing sphere,He illuminates the sky
with his diamond friends.
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Comments: 4
Great first try. Just for your future referenece don't feel that you need to stick with the 5/7/5 skeleton of a haiku. sometimes just a single word is better than two. I can't wait to see more. Keep at it. And i think you meant "diamond"
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Yeah, can't spell. I'll fiw it though.
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yes, FIX. Now that was just the matter of hitting tho wrong key.
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