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Published: 2008-08-06 04:29:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 243; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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The irony of it all, really…But you had to have been there.
They were both what they were
in, what’s really, a blur
It shouldn’t have worked
…Oh, you had to have been there
Like the time that he said
what he shouldn’t have said
and really she wished that she would have been dead
And the time she tried
what she shouldn’t have tried
and really he wished that he could have just died!
Sorry. You had to have been there.
If you’d been you’d have seen
all that I really mean
They were both toppled over, OH!
The irony of it all, REALLY!
This is a senseless rant
but I really can’t
explain it to where…
Forget it. You just HAD to have been there.
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Comments: 5
Akemi-Ayura [2008-10-10 18:48:15 +0000 UTC]
I actually like it. Really. I mean we've all have been in a situation that was hilarious and it was a "you-had-to-have-been-there" situation. I'd like to put it on a sticker or something. It's something I would like to read every once and a while. Great job. A sugar high driven poem always has the potential for greatness.
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Maerko [2008-08-24 18:15:52 +0000 UTC]
I get whats it is intended to say... but its is a bit to disorganised for me to really like it as a poem... but Im sure others disagree
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blobofgoo In reply to Maerko [2008-09-04 19:40:44 +0000 UTC]
It's okay, people have preferences. I don't like this poem either to tell you the truth. It's suposed to be like that though.
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freddyfrijolero [2008-08-07 17:45:49 +0000 UTC]
ill say ...interesting, makes ya think." what in the world?"
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blobofgoo In reply to freddyfrijolero [2008-08-11 02:20:55 +0000 UTC]
yeah, that's the pint. Tell you the truth...it's probably going to scraps soon
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