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This picture take me back, as a child I always loved dandelions, and whatch their seeds blow away in the wind. So this picture very much appeal to my inner child wanting to play again.
Thought this picture bring up alot of emotions I don't like the composition in this piece. The dandelion is cut of in a place it shouldn't be cut, and a part of another dandelion make the composition confusing to look at. Mabe it would be better if we can see the rest of the second dandelion? e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
The blurryness in the background is lovely and the colors nicely fit with eachother. I love how the seeds almost mix in with the green background.
The only sad thing about all this blurryness is that it mix up with the head of the dandelion, I would love to see more focus on some of the seeds on the head.
Overall, really nice work, but the composition needs some work, and if you have a picture with the second dandelion on, I would love to have a look on that e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
I think I'll take some time off work a go play with some dandelions now e.deviantart.com/emoticons/g/gā¦ " width="17" height="15" alt="
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Thank you very much for you comments.
I think the picture "Blowing in the wind" meets your critique (or at least i hope so)in my gallery, i would value you comments on this one.
Thank you again
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