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Published: 2011-12-16 21:07:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 28243; Favourites: 1141; Downloads: 817
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Description READ!! THE!!! DESCRIPTION!!!! (its 25% of whole work that I wasn't able to show here).

Nights passed and Luna was always, all alone. She couldn't understand why Ponys dont like her beautiful night. Days of loneliness turned into weeks, months, years. During that time her only companion was non-existing pony, that she called Nightmare. Luna talked to her like she was real living creature, telling her all thoughts and secrets.
One day, after a serious quarrel with Celestia, Luna went into her private chamber. There for long time she cried, feeling deep grief and anger growing in her heart. It was at this moment she heard a voice in hear head. A voice of Nightmare.
N - Why so sad my dear?
L - What? Who was that? - Luna looked around only to see empty room, hidden in the shadows.
N - Its me. Nightmare...your only friend.
L - But your not real.
N - Ooo... but you wanted me to be real and so... here I am.
L - But...how....
N - Thats not important my dear child. The only thing that matters right now, is you and the truth.
L - Truth about what?
N - You want me to tell you? Fine. You want to know why ponys love the Day but ignores your glories night. Isn't that right?
L - Yes....
N - So use Celestial tears to discover it!
L - NO! I.... I cant... I shouldn't do it.
N - Oh... are you afraid that Celestia will shout at you?
L - No, its just that.....
N - Then do it!
Luna knew that it was the only way to find out the real reason behind this whole situation with ponys. She concentrated on this one thought with all her heart and mind. She had to want it more than anything else.
After few seconds, first tear dropped into the pool of tears she shed moments ago. It stated to glow with strange light creating hardly visible picture of something.
Another tear made it a little bit more distinct. After the third one the picture was all to well clear.
And it was mark of her sister.
N - Now you see who is the one responsible for everything!
L - But....Tia wouldn't do this....she.....
N - She did this Luna, she turned all ponys to love her day and forget about your night.
L - No, no, no....it can't be true!!
N - You know all to well, that Celestial tears never lie. - And it was true. Celestial tears always show only truth, but ONLY when the one that calls their power is alone.
Yet Luna wasn't alone. Nightmare was there, maybe not in body but in spirit, able to change the vision Luna saw.

Pic that won in my voting. Hope you like it

BIG HUG FROM LUNA AND ME FOR EVERYONE WHO FAV IT


MLP: FIM, Luna and Nightmare moon belongs to their rightful owners.
Art and little story is mine.

EDIT - 1000 VIEWS IN LESS THAN A DAY? THATS THE BEST THING THAT COULD HAPPEN TO ME FOR EVERYONE WHO GONNA READ THIS......YOU MAKE ME HAPPIEST MAN ON EARTH BRONY FOR EVER!!!!!! AS A GIFT FOR ALL OF YOU IAM GONNA PREPARE SOMETHING NICE THIS WEEK ( no it wont be another pic like this It will be something else, something that waited too long to be seen)

EDIT 2 - 2000 VIEWS IN LIKE 2 DAYS? Thank you all! MY NEW RECORD!
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Comments: 134

Heart-0f-Darkness In reply to ??? [2011-12-18 23:06:36 +0000 UTC]

[link] browse through old streams,and look at how a master with years of experience do it... Sadly it's not for a comic.But what is a comic without colors? a black and white comic I know,but...you know what i mean XD.

Keepers ^v^? I love that name XD! What is your aspect of art?...

COMIC OF DOOMZ.

Well,we could create an evil society and conquer the mind of people with paintings full of subliminals mesage to make them join nightmare moon >!!
XD.I mean,we could...create... a group with you and me,and we'll do...things and stuff ...
You see XD?...

Can I ask you to look at a WIP to know if something is bad?

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Bonaxor In reply to Heart-0f-Darkness [2011-12-19 06:56:57 +0000 UTC]

WIP of your next pic? Where is it i WANT to see it

About my aspect.....Jeez its hard to come up with one good term to describe it.

We....SHOULD....create....such group but how to do it properly? And only 2 of us? Well.....maybe in time more aspects will show up
To do things and stuff..... hard to do things and stuff through INTERNET. Yet Ive seen that your favorite game is TF2 which means that you sometimes use STEAM.
What do you think?

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Heart-0f-Darkness In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-19 16:53:59 +0000 UTC]

Here [link]
Tell me everything ! This have to be perfect! Are the colors good?

Then tell me what pass by your head XD!

More aspects?...

...you and me, pwning everyone on TF2 ?

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Bonaxor In reply to Heart-0f-Darkness [2011-12-19 22:59:55 +0000 UTC]

Ok lets see....(your art cant be perfect It can only be VERY GOOD)
1. Her eye is first thing that cross my mind. Its a little bit too low, it gets to her jaw.
2. Whats gonna be on the right side? Some background? She should be more in the center of the pic or right side, cuz now i cant find a centerpiece. It look like there supposed to be another pony in front of her. Like she was on the second plan.
3. Those balls are Elements of harmony? If there is more of them, than why only one is emitting the light?
4. Her mane and tail gonna be transparent?
5. Yet again shes a little to thin just like your Luna was. Or maybe Iam just seeing things cuz shes so damn dark, its hard to say that she even got a wing.
6. Colors are very good in my opinion. Its nice that you dont stick to show colors but instead use your own palette. Still one problem, too dark. Thats all.
7. Head is fine, armor fine as well, body too... well thats all.
Thats only my thoughts and you dont have to listen to them yet it could be nice to know that some of them were taken into consideration.

Personally iam good in writing, drawing and painting. I created my own Science-fantasy world, wrote a book, so is there a proper name for such Keeper?

I meant other people that could join this secret group of ours XD. They could become Keepers of different Aspect.

Pwning some noobs in free time but normally chatting Dont know m8. Still it could be strange for me to chat in ENGLISH with a person from other country. Never had good reason to do it. Iam not good at writing in english sooooo.....MANY MISTAKES would occur.

Hope my advices helped in some way. Cant wait to see your work. Next time send link in a note so you will be sure that no one gets it before the release (spies are everywhere, they can even be in this very room....."Right behind you" )

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Heart-0f-Darkness In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-20 14:35:20 +0000 UTC]

It can for me :u! Ok maybe not.I'm usually the first to think it could be wayyy better. (probably cause I am the first who see it XD)

Well,my reference is clear,her eye go to there... Mhh,I should have looked at more.Maybe th first episode.Maybe that even if my reference is a vector... She is not always like that. Alright,i am going to fix this up !

Probably fragments...Like when she destroyed the elements.I think... We'll see.

Those are not elements of harmony,those are elements of *searches for antonyms* *dang discord is already used >:c* Chaos.Elements of chaos! Muhahaha!!
It's the only one emmiting light because it is the only one being ... Made.She is supposed to be creating it with magic so it emmits light. Sadly,elements are something so powerfull than even her can't make them easilly.That's why there is many of them.Probably because she failed or something .

Only the outer part of the mane,but mainly it will not be transparent .

Yeah,that's a sketching issue. I am aware that she is not even as thin as Luna,so i won't make her be thinier than her XD. Don't worry .

There is going to be more highlights here and there,this is just the first layer ^^.


Am i takign them in consideration or not enough of them are being considered ?

You wrote a book?Like,a big 200 pages book?

As long as they are artist,they can join ! Or maybe only good artist?...

Oh,that's not a problem,I am sure you are doing some right now but I can't even see them XD!I do a lot of mistakes too.Some are caused by cold fingers having a hard time to type something,some are caused by extreme frenchness.

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Bonaxor In reply to Heart-0f-Darkness [2011-12-20 15:15:06 +0000 UTC]

Elements of Chaos Jeez you just used my idea that i wanted to use in comic book.
Its nice that you are creating art, where NMM is doing such evil thing heheh.

If you want more feedback than i would need to see next step in painting it. For now..... theres not much to see

I wrote a book that right now, after improvements, has got like 600 pages.....and iam looking for publisher. Sadly in my country publishing a book is something REALLY hard almost IMPOSSIBLE. I have waited now WHOLE YEAR for any response from couple publishers. Ehhh....why Poland is such terrible place for artists Everyone around me are just simple workers that cant see anything more than daily routine.

Keeper must show something with his art, not just simple pics with one or two characters that only stand presenting themselves to the viewer. It must have this special touch, this.....emmmm...Love in it.

Its nice that we both aren't common with English It gives this edge of understanding each other.
Well if it wasn't for French, English language would be total different.

And still I haven't come up with right Keeper name Damn its hard to create such name

(wanted to post it but an idea crossed my mind)

Wait....wait....wait.....If iam, well...good in 3 things that mostly mean creating something....so maybe.....when i like to create my own way instead of following somebody else footsteps.....(God iam starting to take this thing with Keepers REALLY SERIOUSLY)so it leaves me with name..... A Keeper of Creation......LOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLL......

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Heart-0f-Darkness In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-23 14:09:59 +0000 UTC]

hehehe I can read into your mind >:3!
Nice ^^? Why htis ^^?

What about a ask-for-feedback now?

o.O holy,a whole book! Wait a min, do you mind telling me how old are you?



Yeah,this edge of confusion and asking eachother to explain some things !
It would be different ? Why?

o.O Maybe too seriously XD soon you will think about this 24/24 XD!
Keeper of creation? If you were a keeper of creation,you would have tought of a more creativ *shot*

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Bonaxor In reply to Heart-0f-Darkness [2011-12-23 16:02:28 +0000 UTC]

My idea for Elements of Chaos is quite simple and tell a story of Discord How such creature that combines so many different things was able to even exist. Heh I got so big role for Discord in my comic that it need SPOILER ALERT
I like evil stuff

You want some more feedback? If yes than i need to see next step in painting.

I dont mind telling you my age. Iam 21 years old and started creating my world when I was 14.

For many years French was language of the royalty in Britain. After that time many words from your language has become theirs. So thats why i think it could be different.

Iam not thinking about Keeper anymore to be honest. I got so many things on my head. Especially now before Christmas. The worst thing is that i cant get to PC and my tablet to continue panting my comic

You want more creative name? OK m8. Xanarre Keeper. Its from the language of Xarlorns, one of races created by me [link] which means God of Beginning ( Xa-God, na-of, Rre-Beginning.)

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ShadowLegionnaire [2011-12-18 15:24:16 +0000 UTC]

That's touching

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Bonaxor In reply to ShadowLegionnaire [2011-12-18 20:38:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for comment m8

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ShadowLegionnaire In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-18 20:54:41 +0000 UTC]

No problem ^^

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Klice [2011-12-18 12:09:31 +0000 UTC]

Really nice done !

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Bonaxor In reply to Klice [2011-12-18 20:39:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you m8

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Dark1474 [2011-12-18 07:06:21 +0000 UTC]

IT GETS HARDER TO PIC WHITCH, WHTICH, WHICH, I DON'T KNOW ANYMORE BUT THE ITS HARD TO PICK THE LUNA PIC THAT I LOVE THE MOST. ITS INHUMANYLY IMPOSSIBLE AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!.............................by the way nice pic its awesome. NOW ENJOY THIS FACE :3

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Bonaxor In reply to Dark1474 [2011-12-18 20:40:12 +0000 UTC]

Oooo I enjoy it so much

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Dark1474 In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-20 00:43:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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pokemonlover111 In reply to ??? [2011-12-17 23:15:21 +0000 UTC]

what was the real image?

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Bonaxor In reply to pokemonlover111 [2011-12-18 20:43:17 +0000 UTC]

Real image? Its my own original art, created from simple sketch on piece of paper that i draw during my lessons at school.

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pokemonlover111 In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-18 20:46:16 +0000 UTC]

sorry, should have been more specific. What do you think the real image would have been in the celestial tears?

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Bonaxor In reply to pokemonlover111 [2011-12-18 21:04:59 +0000 UTC]

AHA....... now i get it Hmm let me think.....(cuz i haven't thought about it before).

Maybe her own face? Cuz it was probably her fault to believe that no one love her night, when reality was different. Maybe her life as a Princess in Canterlot never gave her a real chance to see how the world look like during the night? Maybe she was so concentrated at this one, bad thought that she could not see the other options?

If you got better idea than I will gladly hear it m8

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pokemonlover111 In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-19 20:49:43 +0000 UTC]

I don't have any better ideas now but if I get one I'll let you know.

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Arthuurs [2011-12-17 23:00:43 +0000 UTC]

realy good, bit sad but good, its story after all, anyway awaiting more amazing art ( and stories i guess ) from you

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Bonaxor In reply to Arthuurs [2011-12-17 23:07:01 +0000 UTC]

It was chosen by destiny ( dices) after the vote on last pic ended. I dont like seeing Luna crying but this one is different.

Well soon ill be posting more pages of my comic book sooo...... it will be some art and story in one

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Arthuurs In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-19 14:26:48 +0000 UTC]

excelent

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Thymi-Lightning [2011-12-17 21:38:06 +0000 UTC]

Sad, but at the same time....wow.

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Bonaxor In reply to Thymi-Lightning [2011-12-17 21:53:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks m8

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adivel [2011-12-17 20:43:20 +0000 UTC]

Join us again, we saved some cookies for you!!

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Mikkeleb In reply to ??? [2011-12-17 17:25:01 +0000 UTC]

everytime i see one the thumbnail of one of your pics i always think. nah this can impossibly be as good as the last one. then i read the description and it suddenly turns 20% cooler. what kind of poetry is this?!?

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Bonaxor In reply to Mikkeleb [2011-12-17 17:37:52 +0000 UTC]

The poetry of Art and Love my friend

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BloodyPink-M [2011-12-17 09:19:23 +0000 UTC]

wow awsome drawing very good

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Bonaxor In reply to BloodyPink-M [2011-12-17 16:05:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks m8 for kind words

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BloodyPink-M In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-18 11:10:52 +0000 UTC]

n_n

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UltiDeviant In reply to ??? [2011-12-17 04:25:40 +0000 UTC]

WOW... That... Is amazing!
This is just too great. ^^

Also, I'd like to point out that THE FUN HAS BEEN DOUBLED!

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Bonaxor In reply to UltiDeviant [2011-12-17 16:09:53 +0000 UTC]

FUN HAS BEEN DOUBLED M8 when I saw how many views this pic have and it wasnt even a day on DA

And yea ty for kind words

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Travics77 [2011-12-17 03:51:03 +0000 UTC]

Amazing!

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Bonaxor In reply to Travics77 [2011-12-17 16:10:27 +0000 UTC]

One word yet telling so much Thanks.

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NeonHueGoggles [2011-12-17 03:08:33 +0000 UTC]

Before I read the description, it looked like:
N: "Welp, looks like we got banished to outer space this time. So, what do you want to do?
L: "I hate you." :<
N: "Oh, boo hoo, is it my fault that that pegasus didn't fly to the moon in a bet? Now, thank god I remembered to bring a deck of cards this time..."

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Bonaxor In reply to NeonHueGoggles [2011-12-17 16:11:43 +0000 UTC]

BIG LOOOOOOL

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BronyForever [2011-12-17 01:49:07 +0000 UTC]

You are improving with each picture, great work on the lighting

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Bonaxor In reply to BronyForever [2011-12-17 16:13:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks to SAI and some nice videos on Youtube I can become better and better

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jodyjm13 [2011-12-17 01:05:33 +0000 UTC]

Excellent drawing, and excellent story to go with it; kudos!

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Bonaxor In reply to jodyjm13 [2011-12-17 16:16:30 +0000 UTC]

Story was probably the hardest thing to come up with When I was painting it I had like 4 different stories for it in my mind. At the end this one was the best in my opinion.

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alamostown [2011-12-17 00:53:08 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful! I love how the picture kind of "flows", if you know what I mean. It's so amazing!

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Bonaxor In reply to alamostown [2011-12-17 16:17:46 +0000 UTC]

Oooo I know all to well what you mean m8 Thanks for kind words

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alamostown In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-17 21:48:21 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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SolarWindKaya In reply to ??? [2011-12-17 00:49:55 +0000 UTC]

AMAZING! I have nothing else to say.

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Bonaxor In reply to SolarWindKaya [2011-12-17 16:18:54 +0000 UTC]

This one word can say many things Many very good things that I Thank for very much

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Katcooldraw In reply to ??? [2011-12-17 00:47:33 +0000 UTC]

Great job on this!!!!!!

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Bonaxor In reply to Katcooldraw [2011-12-17 16:19:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks m8. Took me a lot of time to complete it but every single moment was worth the final result

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EagleSpartan888 In reply to ??? [2011-12-16 23:03:29 +0000 UTC]

Awesome job! I love the colors and the glow effects!

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