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Published: 2011-12-16 21:07:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 28243; Favourites: 1141; Downloads: 817
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Description READ!! THE!!! DESCRIPTION!!!! (its 25% of whole work that I wasn't able to show here).

Nights passed and Luna was always, all alone. She couldn't understand why Ponys dont like her beautiful night. Days of loneliness turned into weeks, months, years. During that time her only companion was non-existing pony, that she called Nightmare. Luna talked to her like she was real living creature, telling her all thoughts and secrets.
One day, after a serious quarrel with Celestia, Luna went into her private chamber. There for long time she cried, feeling deep grief and anger growing in her heart. It was at this moment she heard a voice in hear head. A voice of Nightmare.
N - Why so sad my dear?
L - What? Who was that? - Luna looked around only to see empty room, hidden in the shadows.
N - Its me. Nightmare...your only friend.
L - But your not real.
N - Ooo... but you wanted me to be real and so... here I am.
L - But...how....
N - Thats not important my dear child. The only thing that matters right now, is you and the truth.
L - Truth about what?
N - You want me to tell you? Fine. You want to know why ponys love the Day but ignores your glories night. Isn't that right?
L - Yes....
N - So use Celestial tears to discover it!
L - NO! I.... I cant... I shouldn't do it.
N - Oh... are you afraid that Celestia will shout at you?
L - No, its just that.....
N - Then do it!
Luna knew that it was the only way to find out the real reason behind this whole situation with ponys. She concentrated on this one thought with all her heart and mind. She had to want it more than anything else.
After few seconds, first tear dropped into the pool of tears she shed moments ago. It stated to glow with strange light creating hardly visible picture of something.
Another tear made it a little bit more distinct. After the third one the picture was all to well clear.
And it was mark of her sister.
N - Now you see who is the one responsible for everything!
L - But....Tia wouldn't do this....she.....
N - She did this Luna, she turned all ponys to love her day and forget about your night.
L - No, no, no....it can't be true!!
N - You know all to well, that Celestial tears never lie. - And it was true. Celestial tears always show only truth, but ONLY when the one that calls their power is alone.
Yet Luna wasn't alone. Nightmare was there, maybe not in body but in spirit, able to change the vision Luna saw.

Pic that won in my voting. Hope you like it

BIG HUG FROM LUNA AND ME FOR EVERYONE WHO FAV IT


MLP: FIM, Luna and Nightmare moon belongs to their rightful owners.
Art and little story is mine.

EDIT - 1000 VIEWS IN LESS THAN A DAY? THATS THE BEST THING THAT COULD HAPPEN TO ME FOR EVERYONE WHO GONNA READ THIS......YOU MAKE ME HAPPIEST MAN ON EARTH BRONY FOR EVER!!!!!! AS A GIFT FOR ALL OF YOU IAM GONNA PREPARE SOMETHING NICE THIS WEEK ( no it wont be another pic like this It will be something else, something that waited too long to be seen)

EDIT 2 - 2000 VIEWS IN LIKE 2 DAYS? Thank you all! MY NEW RECORD!
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Comments: 134

Bonaxor In reply to ??? [2011-12-16 23:08:25 +0000 UTC]

Glow effect I used for the VERY first time and i Love the result
And yea thanks for kind words

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EagleSpartan888 In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-17 06:47:19 +0000 UTC]

anytime my friend!

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DarthWill3 In reply to ??? [2011-12-16 23:03:13 +0000 UTC]

Aw... Poor Luna. This reminds me of Jekyll and Hyde!

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Bonaxor In reply to DarthWill3 [2011-12-16 23:06:58 +0000 UTC]

Yea poor Luna, i dont like seeing her crying, but this pic was chosen by fate (dices ) and voting.

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DarthWill3 In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-16 23:37:57 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. I see.

Anyway, you think this is like Jekyll and Hyde or Norman Osborn and the Green Goblin?

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Bonaxor In reply to DarthWill3 [2011-12-17 16:00:03 +0000 UTC]

More like Osborn - Goblin

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DarthWill3 In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-17 16:24:04 +0000 UTC]

Nice comparison!

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Bonaxor In reply to DarthWill3 [2011-12-17 16:32:36 +0000 UTC]

You think so?

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DarthWill3 In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-17 17:09:01 +0000 UTC]

Yeah.

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fiskefyren In reply to ??? [2011-12-16 22:26:51 +0000 UTC]

yay, nothing like making an alter ego to take away some of ones mental pain and to justify a lot of stuff that is perhaps not as it really is :3

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Bonaxor In reply to fiskefyren [2011-12-16 23:01:27 +0000 UTC]

A good explanation ( well at least one of them) for Luna becoming evil

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fiskefyren In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-17 16:54:22 +0000 UTC]

Well... Faust said something at some point that hinted at Luna had been possessed, but that doesn't seem to make a lot of sense to me as in the 2nd episode its more like Luna sees the errors of her way instead of being forcefully forced into doing it... but thats just me :3

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Bonaxor In reply to fiskefyren [2011-12-17 16:58:25 +0000 UTC]

So you think which one is better? My idea or this idea with being Possessed?

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fiskefyren In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-17 22:32:39 +0000 UTC]

To be honest, as a writer I like both aspects. But I'm probably more of a fan of the possession because it if probably a lot easier to write xD

The alter ego is nice if you want to go in depth with a character's state of mind, like said if one endures a lot of torment an alter ego may be the way to save ones sanity (which also happens i real life in some cases).

And the possession is easier in a way, you don't need a lot of explain of how one became bad (in da head!), they simply got overtaken by some other force. But if one desires to write what happens after one is freed from ones possession there is again a lot of stuff one can do with the character, like how this person feels like he/she has been abused against one's own will.

I'm currently writing two fan-fictions (well more, but they don't deal with these issues) where I try to explore both of these aspects, and like said it gives one as a writer many different things to do with a character.

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Bonaxor In reply to fiskefyren [2011-12-17 22:51:27 +0000 UTC]

Heh a fellow writer Your point of view is just like mine.
Iam now creating a comic book where i used this Miasma thing that probably possessed Luna 1000 years ago, but now its back to bring more pain(insert evil laugh)
If you finish this fanfic plz link me to it so i can read it Iam trying to write something on my own but my mother-language is Polish and i haven't got any problem writing in it, but when it comes to English.....its starting to complicate.

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mortalshinobi In reply to ??? [2011-12-16 22:06:37 +0000 UTC]

it is a beautiful painting. nicely done.

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Bonaxor In reply to mortalshinobi [2011-12-16 23:00:34 +0000 UTC]

(hears applause from all sided) Thank you, thank you, It was a pleasure to see all your happy faces.

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mortalshinobi In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-16 23:36:29 +0000 UTC]

welcome.

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Conor-80 In reply to ??? [2011-12-16 22:03:40 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely LOVE it!!! (good job with the dialogue too )

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Bonaxor In reply to Conor-80 [2011-12-16 22:58:01 +0000 UTC]

Iam preparing myself for writing short fanfic

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Conor-80 In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-16 23:17:17 +0000 UTC]

can't wait to see and read it

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Argofinkal [2011-12-16 21:29:13 +0000 UTC]

Ah, my aching heart. This is good.

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Bonaxor In reply to Argofinkal [2011-12-16 22:57:17 +0000 UTC]

THAAAAAAANKS m8

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JimRaynorHyperion In reply to ??? [2011-12-16 21:22:46 +0000 UTC]

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Bonaxor In reply to JimRaynorHyperion [2011-12-16 22:55:34 +0000 UTC]

(speechless mode activated)

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GeneralDurandal In reply to ??? [2011-12-16 21:22:09 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.

The little story is well done.

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Bonaxor In reply to GeneralDurandal [2011-12-16 22:54:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for kind words m8 (and help)

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GeneralDurandal In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-16 22:55:57 +0000 UTC]

Your most welcome, comrade.

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dutch-brony In reply to ??? [2011-12-16 21:16:42 +0000 UTC]

SWEET!!

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Bonaxor In reply to dutch-brony [2011-12-16 21:18:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh... your sweet for telling such sweet things

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dutch-brony In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-16 21:20:04 +0000 UTC]

DUDE!

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Bonaxor In reply to dutch-brony [2011-12-16 21:28:20 +0000 UTC]

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dutch-brony In reply to Bonaxor [2011-12-16 21:29:26 +0000 UTC]

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