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Booknerd135 — Trying To Convince Myself
Published: 2010-04-13 19:39:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 263; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 9
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Description Yes, you've given me butterflies, but it was only once.
That's still one more time than anyone else has.
Sure, I've told you my secrets. I tell things to all my friends.
However, you're the one I trust the most.
Why wouldn't I ask your opinion? I ask for everyone's.
Yours is still the one that matters most to me.
So you've made me cry. Big deal, you're not the only one.
But you are the only one
Who I've cried over because of your support and kindness.
Of course I've thought of your kiss, who doesn't think of someone's?
But you were the only one I kissed for love,
And the only one I liked.
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Comments: 16

Foxstarr [2011-05-15 08:57:53 +0000 UTC]

Ehhhhhh, I don't think it's stupid. From what I have read so far, you are way too hard on yourself. I hope you don't mind me saying this. You seem like a nice girl, and if we went to the same school, you might even be my friend. But I doubt we are even in the same state.

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Booknerd135 In reply to Foxstarr [2011-05-15 14:18:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I am extremely critical of myself, yes. I don't mind. Thank you very much for commenting on my work, it means a lot to me that a stranger would take the time to comfort and support me.

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babymonkey4lyfe [2010-05-02 00:16:35 +0000 UTC]

i feel the same way. lol in my imagination too

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darkelvenfaerie [2010-04-15 04:58:41 +0000 UTC]

Watch your friends might feel spited hearing you trust this person the most.
If you kissed this person for love,
I think you convinced yourself.

Blessed Be,
Midnight Writer Shadow

Founder of Candlelight Writers

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Booknerd135 In reply to darkelvenfaerie [2010-04-15 19:02:23 +0000 UTC]

I hadn't thought about that. I don't know, kissing them just seemed different, I'm not sure if it was love that made the change or not.

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FantasyObsessed27 [2010-04-14 00:00:32 +0000 UTC]

imagination here! (read the comments) hmmm....explains my feelings kinda...LOVE IT

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Booknerd135 In reply to FantasyObsessed27 [2010-04-14 00:03:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
"Imagination here"? Meaning...?

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FantasyObsessed27 In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-04-14 00:14:33 +0000 UTC]

**sigh** i think i was talking about myself in that part...my mind dreams a lot of him and what could happen....this being one of the scenarios....

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Booknerd135 In reply to FantasyObsessed27 [2010-04-14 00:15:21 +0000 UTC]

aw, OK. sorry.

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FantasyObsessed27 In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-04-14 00:24:02 +0000 UTC]

no, it's fine....

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szeh11 [2010-04-13 23:07:18 +0000 UTC]

Did you KISS him??

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Booknerd135 In reply to szeh11 [2010-04-13 23:16:02 +0000 UTC]

No, no, no, I would have told my friends if I had. I'm just talking in my imagination. Wow, that sounded stupid.

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szeh11 In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-04-13 23:25:19 +0000 UTC]

Not really. Laurie, I think that I might love someone. this is a big deal for me. A HUGE deal, I have never felt this way about anyone. I have only had a crush on two people in my whole life.

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Booknerd135 In reply to szeh11 [2010-04-13 23:27:52 +0000 UTC]

Really? Is that good or bad? How do you want me to react to that?

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szeh11 In reply to Booknerd135 [2010-04-13 23:36:48 +0000 UTC]

Well, I can't exactly TELL you how to react . . . But, I think it might be good. You are the first, and only (so far) that I have told. I . . . am confused. I think I need to sort out my feelings more. But, I can tell you one thing: I know that I like him SO much. Lovey-dovey poetry soon to come. . .

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Booknerd135 In reply to szeh11 [2010-04-13 23:39:26 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, can't wait to see it. Really? I'm kinda flattered. I know what you mean by confused, (see pretty much all poems).

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