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Published: 2006-01-13 10:58:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 172; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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Only a few minutes have passedsince we said our last goodbye
I’m still sitting here teary eyed and wondering why
Our last conversation, still running through my head
So many feelings, so many words still left unsaid
So I sit here writing this staring at our photo
Everything and anything I want you to know
I want you to know, that I’m still here for you
Whenever times get rough, you’ll know what to do
I want you to know, I still love you dearly
I hope once again some day I will see you clearly
But for now you will stay, trapped in a memory
For one day, you’ll see, you’ll break through and be free
I know that one day, you will come back to me.
I will not forget who you are
You will stay in my heart, not very far
I will not forget what we felt
I just guess in this game of fate
We play what we are dealt.
I will not forget how it used to be
All I ask from you is
Don’t forget Me.
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Comments: 7
broken-theory In reply to precise-corners [2008-01-06 11:36:04 +0000 UTC]
Thankyou. It was meant for a beautiful person.
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miche11e [2006-01-14 05:35:16 +0000 UTC]
hhmmm well i cant really say much that wouldnt have been repeated.. i want to say something but i dont know how but it was really gud.. and i mean it more than i can say... i hope ur friend will really appreciate the poem coz it's really deep and ... yehh.
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broken-theory In reply to miche11e [2006-01-14 13:33:42 +0000 UTC]
Yea.. I think she did appreciate it.. very much
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AxleJarrett [2006-01-13 16:35:30 +0000 UTC]
Nice poem. Really strong message. The first stanza bids the friend goodbye. The second seems to have the narrator in a sort of denial. Acceptance seems to come in the third. This was pretty well structured with a good closing line, "Don't forget me".
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Eclipsing-Emotions [2006-01-13 14:20:49 +0000 UTC]
This was a strong poem, one what enveloped me in emotions felt. It was very well done, and is quite pure. (Don't worry about what i mean by that.) Anyways, i liked this, and i hope she/he does too. Hells Yeah, Love W00t.
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