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The neck doesn't look right and I don't know how to fix it... Any suggestions?Related content
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Magnanimously beautiful I LOVE IT direct to my
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Ahh the good old Shadowproblem ... just "lift" the right side a little bit so the triangle closes at 35-40 deg 
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Hmm... Yes, maybe that will do it! Thanks! 
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awesome! i like it the way it is but if you are going to get nit picky with the neck i think that its just the line on the left that comes down to the chest, it doesn't make sense but i wouldnt worry about it the whole thing is beautiful!
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Thank you, I'm glad you like it! Yes, I'll definitely have to take that away. I was trying to make it look like she bended a bit, but I'll try to redo the muscles in another way. Thank you for making me see the problem more clearly
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yay glad to have been helpful! if u hadnt asked i would have never even noticed it to begin with! its really beautiful
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realy nice color chose and hard work on eyes...brutal proportions of orginal talk about hard work what you did on it...black dot under right eye is a bit disturbing but anyway hardcore great work
fix neck: place shoulders higer...make neck more simetric-without big black hole on riht...its pipe so shade it more round,,..make that brown-oragne tentacle under skin what goes from head to chest damn shorter, more skinny and focued...its muscle with tendon-so skinny in foward wide behind what smoothly goes in neckand make more detailed part where end chest bones...
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Thanks for all the great critique! I will definitely keep this in mind when I redraw the neck
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Hmm its not critique...as i sayd i like your picture and you did fine work
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Oh, I didn't mean it like that! What you gave me was constructive criticism which is great to get. That way you helped me see more clearly how I can improve the piece, so I'm really grateful
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That's really interesting, very nice ^^ For the neck, perhaps you could draw the symetric vertical muscle, but less pronounced...
Oh and, happy
birthday (never too late ^^)
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Yeah, I'll definitely make the muscle a lot smaller!
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Hm, maybe you can make a bit notorious the left sternocleidomastoideus? (Such a long name XD)
It's looking very nice as it is now, tho
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I had to google image that xD I get what you mean now, thanks!
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