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Guess who's fallen back into Jak and Daxter Hell?? 8D

Of course while I'm away from home without internet or my playstation. Because that's how life works. (even though I have a few grievences with the games themselves but that's for another time)

I was feeling lazy yesterday and wanted to draw something but not like... put effort into it XD;; so I dug the picture on the left out to just ink and colour it, but looking at it after all this time I was just like "no... no this needs to be fixed. This is not ok."

I drew the original picture at a time when I felt my art was really really stiff and lifeless for some reason. But there was enough there for me to still kind of like it up to a point. So I basically did a red-line of the whole picture and what you see on the right is the result.

Apart from things like the hands... I'm not sure if improvement? I still was lazy and used the original rough as a starting point so it's not a completely fresh drawing to compare progress, I know.

Human!Daxter is very similar to the original sketch simply because I actually really like how the original came out. So I just made some minor changes to flesh it out nicer and improve what was there. Jak I gave much more structure to his face and paid more attention to his anatomy so he looked less like he was made of lego pieces and more like a human being.... which then all got covered up by clothes of course.
Ottsel!Daxter was actually the biggest change here since I was completely unsatisfied with him and believe it or not actually gave me the most trouble in this picture. You'd think knowing how to draw Ratchet rather nicely would mean I'd understand an Ottsel's head-shape better.
....you'd be wrong.

I can't decide if I should increase Jak's head size a little. It's more accurate for hoomans but I'm wondering if I should change it slightly to closer match the game or not. I can't decide.

2013 on the left, 2016 on the right.

Description
Guess who's fallen back into Jak and Daxter Hell?? 8D

Of course while I'm away from home without internet or my playstation. Because that's how life works. (even though I have a few grievences with the games themselves but that's for another time)

I was feeling lazy yesterday and wanted to draw something but not like... put effort into it XD;; so I dug the picture on the left out to just ink and colour it, but looking at it after all this time I was just like "no... no this needs to be fixed. This is not ok."

I drew the original picture at a time when I felt my art was really really stiff and lifeless for some reason. But there was enough there for me to still kind of like it up to a point. So I basically did a red-line of the whole picture and what you see on the right is the result.

Apart from things like the hands... I'm not sure if improvement? I still was lazy and used the original rough as a starting point so it's not a completely fresh drawing to compare progress, I know.

Human!Daxter is very similar to the original sketch simply because I actually really like how the original came out. So I just made some minor changes to flesh it out nicer and improve what was there. Jak I gave much more structure to his face and paid more attention to his anatomy so he looked less like he was made of lego pieces and more like a human being.... which then all got covered up by clothes of course.
Ottsel!Daxter was actually the biggest change here since I was completely unsatisfied with him and believe it or not actually gave me the most trouble in this picture. You'd think knowing how to draw Ratchet rather nicely would mean I'd understand an Ottsel's head-shape better.
....you'd be wrong.

I can't decide if I should increase Jak's head size a little. It's more accurate for hoomans but I'm wondering if I should change it slightly to closer match the game or not. I can't decide.

2013 on the left, 2016 on the right.