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Captainfusion — Fishing with a friend
Published: 2012-12-22 22:08:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 983; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 6
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Not one of my finest works to date... Sigh what a mess.Related content
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ahh... much better now.
You coul still push the values of its head a little, but not very much, if you want to place it more solidly in the 3-dimensional space.
But I think the focus is much better now, I don't get confused as to where to look, while the light doesn't draw my eye away from the characters either.
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Ok, yea I decided upon a main lightsource and made the sky darker. I also removed some rim light and added some atmosphere.
It was a colour practise piece but failed as I had to patch on it in the end to get the focus down. Whatever, next painting...
Thanks for the feedback you gave me though, I did use it, I just couldn't be bothered to update the version on the web.
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It's fine.
The composition just needed some help.
The colours ran away in terms of value, but that happens to everyone, I think.
I think it's important to apply what you learn onto the things you learn them on.
When it's fresh in memory, that's when we have to kinda solidify it.
Anyhow, happy to help.
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I like it! You really get the sense of chaos and "magic" you probably would feel when you accidentally get Nessie hooked
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Ok, thanks. It was a struggle of placing the focus point at the end. I started on a new project now. This wasn't my best at all. But thanks for the feedback!
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