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Published: 2008-12-27 04:58:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 172; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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This race knows no boundariesas it takes all it desires
without foresight, without reason
or cause of action:
Fields are grown, picked, and
burned as time moves past like
a river in the rocky bed of life...
Homes are built from the lives
of wooden giants; we cower
inside of their flesh while
the sap in their veins
drips down their sides in the dark,
the sound evoking memories of dripping faucets
and other modern mechanisms of man...
We squabble and complain,
thinking only of our greedy needs
as clammy fingers grope without sight,
praying they will find some prize and
cling to it, sucking the life
from its fading consciousness
until all that's left is a
shriveled corpse, unable to
feel the pain as scavengers
pick, bite, and gnaw at its
frigid physique...
Mankind, with the potential
to be the greatest of all things,
has forgotten to learn from the past:
forgotten not to fly too close
to the sun and has melted,
just like Icarus, who couldn't
fight the boiling heat of temptation;
we have fallen to our deaths, mere
cinders in the fierce winds
of winter, scattered and lost...
Comments: 13
PhantomThiefVier [2009-01-09 03:30:40 +0000 UTC]
"don't you think the human race is ceaselessly vain?"
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catnipkitty In reply to PhantomThiefVier [2009-01-09 04:19:27 +0000 UTC]
I like this song. Thanks for reading!
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shadowsonwater [2009-01-09 01:01:24 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic emotive imagery, especially in the third stanza. Cynical or not, it's honest, and I think that's why I love it ^_^
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catnipkitty In reply to shadowsonwater [2009-01-09 04:19:58 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much! I'm glad you like it!
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RockerByBaby [2009-01-08 06:17:40 +0000 UTC]
Love the smell comment you've received
This is a wonderful piece as well, and the category..most definitely!
Great title, I enjoyed the read.
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catnipkitty In reply to RockerByBaby [2009-01-08 22:51:33 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! And yes, the smell comment was great, lol. It was from my friend back at college.
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kitsune2022 [2008-12-27 05:57:47 +0000 UTC]
The imagery is AWESOME! I think this poem even has a smell! *sniff* It smells like earth! Yus, yus it does. lD Earth and wood and smoke.
I love it.
catnipkitty In reply to kitsune2022 [2008-12-28 04:42:36 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it!
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