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Published: 2007-01-03 00:43:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 1046; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 62
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The interaction between Jubilee and Laura is a little weird on this page as is Laura's nose. Also Emma once agian shows that she has less kindness in her than than Wolverine or the Punisher.
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I like the style, and the dialog looks downright professional. The only thing that bugs me about this is how similar X-23 and Jubilee look to each other, almost like twins. I mean, looking closer, I can see differences in their features, but maybe they're not diverse enough.
But I love the humor. It's the kind of stuff you'd expect if folks like this really existed.
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I'm real like you like the dialog and humor!
About X and Jubes----sorry man, I don't see it. I think "twins" is a bit extreme. They have the same size---more less, and their their faces are different too---different nose/eyes/lip shape. They may not look Incredibly diverse, but they don't like alike.
Nevertheless---I'm glad you're diggin' this---be here for issue #2!
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Yeah, sorry, that was harsh. I shouldn't have said twins. I was trying to find a clear way of saying what you basically said. At a glance they do have similarities but not under close examination. I was dead wrong about that, apologies.
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No problem with the direction at all here. Funny dialogue. Again with the slightly odd torsos. It's really evident on X23. Maybe her hips should be wider? ...
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You wanted to pack a lot of narration into one page, and though you managed to do it, there are some awkward compositions, like Jubilee looking right, then left, then right, then left again. These little things can make a page look more confusing.
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Again, I think this goes back to your comment about page--3---yeah page 3. She's not "looking" right.
It's not so much the face direction as it is the eyes. Realistically, the only way X and Jubes could be facing the same way is if their bodies were facing OPPOSITE directions. They're side to side, but their eyes are locked on each other.
It's something done in a lot of movies(well...good ones anyway
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