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CelestialSpecter — Enjoying The View. Jake E. X Reader!
Published: 2013-11-29 06:18:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 14517; Favourites: 303; Downloads: 0
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Description     "(Y/n)!" Her head whisked around, soon after she found herself pressed to the floor. A warm body covered her own; she was pressed chest to chest to someone. However, these two were no strangers to each other. When (Y/n) looked up, she saw the sparkling emerald eyes of her best friend, Jake English. He was smirking at her, a devilishly handsome smile that made her stomach feel like a swarm of butterflies suddenly started a tornado in her gut.

    "Why (Y/n) dearest, I apologize for the sudden tackle. But, my eyes happened to see you and I found it this an exciting way to say good morning!" His accent tickled her ears; it was something that sounded melodious. She giggled, sticking her tongue out playfully.

    "Well Jake, it was quite a surprise." He laughed, a rumble that she could feel, as the two were still pressed together. As if he could read her mind, he propped himself up on his hands, just enough to separate their faces an inch or two.

    "What are you thinking of (Y/n)? You look like you're on cloud nine!" She smiled, resting her arms behind her head.

    "Oh, I'm just enjoying the view English." He sputtered slightly, eyes wide and face pink.

    "W-W-What ever do you mean (Y/n)!" She giggled again, causing the boy's face to turn darker.

    "Calm down Jake~ I'm just teasing you!" For an instant, the youth looked crestfallen, though his glittering eyes and smile hid it well; (Y/n) could still see it though.

    "Oh, well if it's teasing you want then it's teasing you'll get!" Her eyebrow raised slightly, although soon she was a giggling mess.
 
    Jake's fingers began to wiggle against her skin gently, covering her ribs, stomach, and sides in waves of ticklish fun. Her own face was a light pink from the lack of air, all the precious oxygen was going out through her laughter of course. After a few minutes and a couple begs for a truce later, (Y/n) was propped on Jake's chest; their position had flipped completely from earlier.  

    Now, (Y/n) laid on Jake's body, her arms propping her head up. The two were in a peaceful silence, nothing heard but the sounds of their soft breathing. Jake broke the silence however by asking one simple question.

    "(Y/n), do you love anyone?" This question caught the girl off-guard, causing her eyes to fly open.

    "What?" He smiled, laying a hand on her head as he began to run his fingers through her silky, (H/c) locks.

    "You heard me. You just don't want to answer." She just shrugged and looked at him sheepishly.

   "And if I do love someone?" His hand froze in her hair, pushing her just a bit closer to his face.

   "Then, you might hate me after this." Before she could ask what he meant, he completed the meeting of their lips. His lips slanted over hers, causing the girl's already wide eyes to become even wider.

   After a tense moment or two, her body relaxed and she eagerly replied to the kiss. And, when he ran his soft tongue over her bottom lip, she gladly let him in. His slick muscle tangled with hers, causing a satisfied moan to escape from Jake's own mouth. The two pulled back, heated wisps of air filling the area from their panting.

   "Jake English, what was the meaning of that?" He just gave her a grin.

   "Well, I was enjoying the view, but then I realized I wanted something more." (Y/n) nestled into his warm embrace and whispered,

   "And what is this something more?" He tilted her head up to look at him, (e/c) orbs locking with emerald.

   "I want you to be mine, from now to the end of time." She smiled sweetly, planting a small peck to his lips.

   "Why, I want nothing more!"
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Comments: 85

Filllyreports [2016-10-30 13:31:25 +0000 UTC]

AWWWWE!!!!

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Mirajosefin [2016-06-26 10:23:42 +0000 UTC]

Yeeeee, so cute~

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XylenneIsNotAmazing [2016-03-15 07:32:44 +0000 UTC]

Cuteeeeeeee omfg

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TohruHinada [2016-01-08 07:01:32 +0000 UTC]

OMG TO ADORABLE HJDDGDDDDGRH

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Joifuldew [2015-06-13 22:27:11 +0000 UTC]

It was still a cute story! Hell, I LOVED IT! ITS SO CUTE!

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ferriluver101 [2015-02-18 16:39:31 +0000 UTC]

I CANT EITHER T^T but i  love yours

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BellaDonna113 In reply to ferriluver101 [2016-06-16 12:41:45 +0000 UTC]

I see you EVERYWHERE

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ferriluver101 In reply to BellaDonna113 [2016-06-23 01:43:16 +0000 UTC]

Ay lmao

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Amberpelt7 [2014-10-12 16:48:17 +0000 UTC]

You referred to jake as a she in a few places. Love this!

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CelestialSpecter In reply to Amberpelt7 [2014-10-15 01:29:53 +0000 UTC]

Where did I, if you would please? I can't seem to find it at all! 

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Amberpelt7 In reply to CelestialSpecter [2014-10-17 01:31:30 +0000 UTC]

apologies, I think I may be wrong.  normally actions from individual characters are separated rather than being in the same indentation, for instance,  when it said "What are you thinking of (Y/n)? You look like you're on cloud nine!" She smiled, resting her arms behind her head. it makes it seem like Jake is the one resting his arms behind his head when it is actually the reader.  I think that this is just a writing style and point of view that I'm not used to, rather than it being a mistake. sorry or the mix-up!

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CelestialSpecter In reply to Amberpelt7 [2014-10-17 15:06:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh, don't worry about it! I guess since I wrote it, the whole thing was clear for me. Sorry for causing any confusion!

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MidnaPlayer [2014-09-27 19:03:58 +0000 UTC]

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Fanstuck-X-Reader [2014-08-28 21:30:37 +0000 UTC]

Extended ending
<================>
"Erm... Jake... why do you have your gun with you...?" (Y/N) asked, leaning off him.

"Oh dear..." Jake said, with an even bigger blush spreading across his face, if that was possible...

(Read between the lines, people. )

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Amberpelt7 In reply to Fanstuck-X-Reader [2014-10-12 16:49:52 +0000 UTC]

I think my grin when I read that rivaled both the Cheshire Cats and Jeff the killers grins. Combined.

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Fanstuck-X-Reader In reply to Amberpelt7 [2014-10-12 18:51:25 +0000 UTC]

x3

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CelestialSpecter In reply to Fanstuck-X-Reader [2014-08-29 23:30:15 +0000 UTC]

OH DANG.
Boner.

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KarkittyVantas413 [2014-08-06 05:12:35 +0000 UTC]

I saw it all in my head and it was beautiful ;u;  

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EvilAngel3 [2014-07-17 11:54:59 +0000 UTC]



It's so fluffty and cute!

それがすごいでした!

(That was amazing!)

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CelestialSpecter In reply to EvilAngel3 [2014-07-17 15:47:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very very much! I'm so gad you enjoyed!

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EvilAngel3 In reply to CelestialSpecter [2014-07-17 16:10:37 +0000 UTC]

You ought to write Jake more often, you're exceptionally brilliant at it!

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CelestialSpecter In reply to EvilAngel3 [2014-07-17 22:49:36 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe, I wouldn't say brilliant. I just use antiquated words like him, so I'm easily able to incorporate them into dialogue.
Thank you though, it's very sweet of you to say such nice things. 

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EvilAngel3 In reply to CelestialSpecter [2014-07-18 05:46:12 +0000 UTC]

Can I make a request, since you write so well, Mukie-chan?

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CelestialSpecter In reply to EvilAngel3 [2014-07-18 09:41:49 +0000 UTC]

Of course! Requests are open pretty much all the time. ^^

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EvilAngel3 In reply to CelestialSpecter [2014-07-18 10:01:01 +0000 UTC]

Yay!! Can I request another Jake x Reader, but this time reader chan is very chubby and insecure.

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CelestialSpecter In reply to EvilAngel3 [2014-07-18 12:25:06 +0000 UTC]

Sounds cute!
I love chubby people. Honestly I want to scoop them all up and just give them all hugs and kisses.

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EvilAngel3 In reply to CelestialSpecter [2014-07-18 13:09:06 +0000 UTC]

Haha, do you think you can do it?

I'm fat myself, so I'm always watching for good chubby!reader fics. It's strange, nobody uses the word fat for those kind of fics

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CelestialSpecter In reply to EvilAngel3 [2014-07-18 14:11:17 +0000 UTC]

Of course I can! Extra fluff just for you dear, you deserve it!
I believe it's because "fat" is seen as a more insulting term. No writer wants to make their readers feel bad or insulted.
For me, when I hear chubby I think of cute curves and a pleasant thickness that's fun to cuddle with.

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EvilAngel3 In reply to CelestialSpecter [2014-07-18 14:14:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much, that's so nice of you. Will you note me when it's done, mukie-chan?

That's a good point. I don't put fat when I'm writing chubby fics. Oh! And as a bonus, for that fluffy Jake reader insert, you can have RQ privileges.
And I have a muffin top and no thigh gap, flab to my arms and a lotta extra in the chest if you know what I mean. So that's not cute, to me.

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CelestialSpecter In reply to EvilAngel3 [2014-07-18 14:50:52 +0000 UTC]

That sounds adorable to me. I'm sure you're a real cutie patootie. So, even if you don't think you're cute, you definitely are to me, if that helps!

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EvilAngel3 In reply to CelestialSpecter [2014-07-18 15:07:52 +0000 UTC]

There's a pic of me on my profile, if that's of any aid. You'll see.

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CelestialSpecter In reply to EvilAngel3 [2014-07-19 06:33:38 +0000 UTC]

You look fine dear, quite pretty!

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EvilAngel3 In reply to CelestialSpecter [2014-07-19 06:34:17 +0000 UTC]

Well I'm glad someone thinks so.

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YusiFel [2014-04-20 07:50:53 +0000 UTC]

:33 < EEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! IT'S S0 FLUFFY    

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Mikaellakun [2014-02-26 14:05:59 +0000 UTC]

why i cnat write like this

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CelestialSpecter In reply to Mikaellakun [2014-02-26 23:12:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure you can! 

Everyone lacks a little self esteem when they start. I honestly thought I was a terrible writer. You can't be as bad as you think.

But thank you also, since I'm assuming this was a compliment!

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KalishRalich [2014-02-25 02:40:26 +0000 UTC]

“She was prested chest to chest with someone" Chest To Chest?Hmmm.~

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CelestialSpecter In reply to KalishRalich [2014-02-25 02:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Finally someone makes this comment! Yay!

I waited so long.   

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KalishRalich In reply to CelestialSpecter [2014-02-25 03:45:07 +0000 UTC]

Your Welcome I Just Had To Say It Cuz Once I Read That Part I Thought Sexual Things! Yeah I Have A Dirty Mind Blame It On All The Lemons I Read!~XD

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alicemoonlight123 [2014-02-13 17:03:49 +0000 UTC]

*Flailing*

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JeffsGirl14863 [2014-01-22 01:59:11 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THO MANY FEEEELLLLLLTHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

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SamanthLovesDarik [2014-01-19 04:09:15 +0000 UTC]

Best so far thx best friend

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MissMagicalWolf [2014-01-10 17:37:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm waiting for any others jakexreader's from you, ma'am c:

This

is 

too

good <3

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StealthElf [2014-01-04 00:59:37 +0000 UTC]

"A warm body covered her own; she was pressed chest to chest to someone."...chest to chest eh?

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CelestialSpecter In reply to StealthElf [2014-01-04 05:10:40 +0000 UTC]

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Grand-Highboob [2013-12-15 07:00:13 +0000 UTC]

*slaps you with a wet soggy slimy smelly fish*

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KalishRalich In reply to Grand-Highboob [2014-02-25 02:32:51 +0000 UTC]

What The Hell Lax This Is The Second Time I Found You Commenting On DeviantART!!!!!!!~

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Grand-Highboob In reply to KalishRalich [2014-03-07 23:36:27 +0000 UTC]

Hi

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KalishRalich In reply to Grand-Highboob [2014-03-08 09:05:28 +0000 UTC]

…………

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Grand-Highboob In reply to KalishRalich [2014-03-08 16:10:43 +0000 UTC]

Fuck you to

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