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CellularModular — My Sunset
Published: 2006-05-29 19:27:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 108; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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The sun goes downThis day will end
To all the people
My prayers I send
I philosophise
About my life
When will I die?
Who’ll be my wife?
But it’s too soon
I’ve still got hope
That I’ll succeed
Without the dope
Life looks good
I just can’t frown
And then I smile
As the sun goes down
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Comments: 3
waaaw this is very nice poem! i love it!
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really great poem. i love the hope in it which says alot considering most of my poetry is despondent. it seems like it's saying that u're more or less living for now rather than worrying too much about ur future in those ways. well that's what it feels like to me. that's something i respect. i tend to look more into the future which seems to make things worse at times. anyhow, great piece!
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