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Full view for a better picture please!So for my graphic design class, we had to redesign a pre-existing magazine cover, and then create a feature article.
I decided to redo '
The article spread got messed up when I transferred it between computers, so I will try to fix that as soon as I can and upload it fr you guys
Comments/ feedback much appreciated!
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Comments: 18
ariel44 [2009-11-21 18:48:06 +0000 UTC]
That is what I think she should look like as a vampire
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FrauleinVampyria [2009-11-01 15:35:36 +0000 UTC]
So goth... she looks like a real vampire on this picture
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chariots-of-light In reply to jleighbean [2009-05-24 16:26:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much
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zutaralivson [2008-03-17 04:29:41 +0000 UTC]
Nice! Sorry for the late comment ... but it's a way cool cover!
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chariots-of-light In reply to zutaralivson [2008-03-17 20:47:42 +0000 UTC]
Not a problem! And thank you very much!
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C0nfluence [2008-03-10 23:28:26 +0000 UTC]
Very nice!
I agree with some of =Mizra's comments, but overall it looks pretty good!
I hope you got a good mark! You deserved it!
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chariots-of-light In reply to C0nfluence [2008-03-11 03:03:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! I believe I got a 95 on the project, but it might have been a 92. I can't remember
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C0nfluence In reply to chariots-of-light [2008-03-13 22:20:10 +0000 UTC]
Wow, fantastic! Good for you!
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Mizra [2008-03-09 00:41:19 +0000 UTC]
Nice work, but there are few things a little... off:
1. The "Premiere" name should be a little lower and brighter, unless the faded look is what you are going for.
2. I'd move the barcode up a bit, nudging to the right and to the top a little.
3. Watch the edges with your fonts; with magazines, the edge is a bit close and might get cut off when printed.
Overall, I think it's a good cover. I like the fact that you used the original font for Twilight and did a nice work treating(?) the photo of Kristen Stewart.
(P.S. - I'm excited about the movie, too!)
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chariots-of-light In reply to Mizra [2008-03-09 04:24:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! Yeah, I was kind of going for the faded look, I felt like it matched with the theme. Thanks for the constructive criticism and I'm glad you liked it
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Mizra In reply to chariots-of-light [2008-03-09 13:36:53 +0000 UTC]
I was hoping I wasn't being rude, but I'm glad you took it fine. It's good graphic design work, that's for sure.
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chariots-of-light In reply to Mizra [2008-03-09 21:15:06 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I know you weren't being rude! Thank you so much!
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