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A Kind of sequel to this:    chill13.deviantart.com/art/Mee…


Arthur cinched the last strap, patted the horse and turned to the King with a smile.  "All set."

    It had seemed to be quite a complicated procedure--saddling the horses.  And it was one English activity Paramount had no desire to try for himself.  It involved far too much contact with the horse.  Arthur had enthusiastically demonstrated each step of the process while the King stood as far away as he could while still seeming politely interested.  Paramount had been a bit surprised when Arthur gave one of the beasts a swift kick in the gut before tightening the saddle.  The young soldier had explained that the horse sometimes drew in a deep breath when the saddle was being cinched so it wouldn't remain tight.  That only proved to the King that not only were these creatures amazingly large and powerful but they were also cunning.  And that made him even more wary.

    Arthur had finished the preperations and the moment he had come to dread had finally arrived.  The young man motioned to the horse with a proud grin.  "Up you go."

    Paramount approached cautiously, staring at the animal and the saddle and feeling quite overwhelmed.  "How do I go about getting on?"

    "It's simple Darling. You put your foot in there."

    "No.  The other foot."  Arthur corrected.  "You don't want to end up backwards."

    The King did as he was told, putting a foot into the stirrup and hopping up onto the animal's back.  "I--I don't believe this is quite right."  He had ended up with his stomach across the saddle with his feet dangling on one side and his head on the other.  The horse shuffled it's feet beneath him and he very nearly leaped off.

    "It's alright."  Arthur tried valliantly to keep a staight face.  "Just haul one leg over.  That's it."

    The King managed to get both legs astride and as he slowly and carefully sat up.  A small smile slid across his face.  He was actually sitting atop the largest animal any Utopian had ever seen!

    Both Sophy and Arthur climbed aboard their horses with a practiced ease that made Paramount feel quite self-conscious. 

    “Now, hold the reigns between your fingers…like so.”

    Paramount followed the instructions, letting the leather straps rest between his first and middle finger.  “Like this?”

    “Don’t sit so ridged.”  Sophy said looking perfectly at ease on top of Jack.  “The horse knows when you’re uncomfortable.”

    Paramount started a bit, glancing nervously it the massive bundle of muscle beneath him.  “It does?”  Elsie shifted a bit and he took in a small gasp, then looked up at Sophy with a little a small humorous smile.  “And I thought I was hiding it so well.”

    They had him lead the horse in a circle a few times, showing him how to use the reigns to guide the creature.  Once he grew accustomed to the idea of actually sitting on an animal’s back he was amazed at the power he now wielded, controlling this mighty beast with little more than a flick of his wrist.  Even as sovereign ruler of Utopia he had never felt quite so…influential.  

    “There you are!  You’re doing fine.  You see it’s not so difficult.  You’ll be jumping hurdles in no time.”

    “Hurdles!?”  Sophy exclaimed.  “You are supposed to be protecting his majesty not breaking his neck!”

    “Well, I didn’t mean today.  Shall we be off?”

    Riding was easier than the King had thought.  Elsie did most of the work, walking along beside the other horses.  He gradually became used to the motion of the animal walking beneath him, although he never could relax entirely.  The six of them, three riders and their mounts, wandered through rolling green fields and soon found themselves entering a small wood. 

    “I rather miss horses.”  Lady Sophy sighed just a bit as they picked their way through the Autumn trees, fiery leaves falling around them.  “Perhaps we can bring a few back with us.  It would be lovely riding on Utopia’s shores.”

    Paramount no more that opened his mouth to reply than a bush near Elsie’s feet exploded into a fluttering mass of chirping and beating wings.  The horse let out a horrifying shriek and reared back, kicking her front legs in the air.  If the King hadn’t managed to grab the edge of the saddle he would have tumbled backwards.  The moment Elsie’s hooves hit the ground she leaped into a gallop.  The impact was bone jarring.  Paramount’s foot slipped clean out of the right stirrup and he lurched sideways, one leg shooting down and the rest of his body following.  He found himself clinging to the side of the beast as the world streaked by at a blinding speed, the ground only a couple feet below him, churning under thundering hooves.  He tried to right himself, climb back up but with only one leg hooked over the horse and one hand gripping the saddle for dear life, the broiling mass of muscle jarring him with each stride, it was all he could do to just hold on.

    Then suddenly up ahead the ground ended.  He scarcely had time to think about it before Elsie leaped and they were in the air.  Paramount’s grip gave way and he fell.

    ~

    “Monty!”  Sophy screamed as she and Captain Fitzbattlaxe skidded to a stop at the edge of the drop off and leaped from their horses and rushed to the edge of the embankment. 

    There, in the middle of a small creek was Paramount sopping wet from head to toe and shivering.

    “Are…are you alright?”  Arthur asked, scurrying down the bank.

    “Are you hurt?”  Sophy followed, pulling up her skirts as she carefully picked her way down to the water.

    The King looked down at the creek and his drenched clothes…and laughed.  “Has anyone a bar of soap?  As long as I’m in here I might as well wash.”

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I've had this picture in my mind for months now and have tried sketching it several times but each time it stank so bad I didn't even want to think about it again.  But you know what they say!  If you fall off a horse you got to climb right back on again!

This is, of course, King Paramount from Gilbert and Sullivan's comic opera, Utopia Limited.


Used stock: 

kuschelirmel-stock.deviantart.…

salamander-stock.deviantart.co…

khalidia.deviantart.com/art/Au…

www.deviantart.com/art/Fall-33…

chunga-stock.deviantart.com/ar…  (used this for a pose reference for the horse......OKAY so I traced it!  I hate drawing horses!)


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daisybtoes [2014-01-21 07:44:44 +0000 UTC]

This is my first chance to write a comment here.  I know I told you in private how much I liked it, but I'll post a comment here, too, now that my poor, ailing computer has come home from the computer hospital.


I really do love your pictures of King Paramount and his friends & relatives.  He's got such a look of restrained  panic on his face that I can almost hear a howl of terror trailing behind him as the horse gallops off.  Of course, who knows how fast that horse is really running?  A little canter would seem like a wild ride to his poor Majesty.  But my eyes were immediately drawn to the amazing way you captured the motion of running horse legs.  Just wonderful.


The story is cute, too.  I keep hoping you'll get around to finishing this big epic so everyone can read it.  Yeah, yeah, I know.  I have an adventure tale to finish myself.  I need to do that, too, as I have other plot bunnies hopping in my head.


Drawing Paramount is tricky for me since I always saw him as a tall, handsome, humorous-faced chap, not unlike the man in my UL poster talking about "...power, scandal, love, and blowing people up..."  but the real problem is I can't get a very different image out of my head, based on a DVD I've seen -- a tiny, skinny little fella with a roundish little face, big black eyebrows, and not too bad looking, really...well, you get the idea.  So what is an artist to do with such contradictions fighting for my attention?


 

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daisybtoes In reply to daisybtoes [2014-01-22 01:51:41 +0000 UTC]

The trouble with that computer is it keeps pulling down trojans from unknown locations.  They haven't seemed to spread to anyone else, so I guess they are just localized.  But they keep messing up my screen and my access to various websites.  The last straw was when everything on screen showed up as a negative photography.  Robin sat on it for almost three weeks (like he sits on my DVDs!) before I got disgusted and took the computer to my local fix-it man.  I'd have gotten it back in three days, except I wasn't able to get out before yesterday.


Anyway, I have so much online to catch up with that my head is spinning.  Pages and pages of emails, must of which can be dealt with quickly.  My Farmville game online is sadly out of date, and I want to work on my stories, too.  Just a shambles!  I'll be a solid week straightening it all up.


I am thinking of that belligerant horse from "Tangled", only maybe not quite so malicious.  A horse that would enjoy tormenting the idiot on his back.  Poor Paramount must be shaking all over. This would make a great animated adventure, wouldn't it?    Myself, I do want to write more Utopian adventures.  One is in my head even now, as well as a couple of Mikado stories.


There stories I want to write, but I'm afraid you won't read them. -1.- An 11 year old John Wellington Wells on his sorting day at Hogwartz. -2.- How Iolanthe met the man she loved; the only problem being, we don't know his name.  But I also want to do something else since I was listening to The Gondoliers recently, and the Duke of Plaza-Toro is giving off this smug explanation of  how he's got the idea of incorporating himself as a Company Limited, and who got what idea from who?  He lived 200 years earlier than King Paramount, but then, the Mikado technically lived  around the same time, and it didn't bother him in the least.  After I've left Antarctica, I'm having the Utopian Royals taking up the Mikado's invitation to come for the cherry blossom festival.  That could be a lot of fun.                                                                                                                                                                               


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chill13 In reply to daisybtoes [2014-01-21 16:59:24 +0000 UTC]

Yay computer!  


Thanks so much.  The characters from Utopia are just so fun and endearing.  I love to draw them.  I'd been meaning to draw this picture for FOREVER.  Yeah, I really doubt Paramount is being quiet at this point.  There's probably a whole lot of screaming and 'nice horsie!!!' going on.  

Thanks.  I messed around with the direction of blur on the legs for awhile before it looked right.  


Yeah......I hope to get back to it sometime.  But I'm really trying to work on my Hi Ho Hyperdrive story because the characters in there actually belong to me.  


Hmmmm.  Just have a big sketchpage.  Do both types then mix them.  

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daisybtoes In reply to chill13 [2014-02-01 15:35:02 +0000 UTC]

I need to know...are you getting my email messages, or are they just floating around in space?

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daisybtoes [2014-01-02 06:35:51 +0000 UTC]

That was a lot of fun, and the picture goes with it perfectly.  You never fail to amaze me.  I love your Utopian stories (I still have that one to complete and another to start, myself) so much, and I don't see nearly enough of them.  Thanks for another cute story.

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chill13 In reply to daisybtoes [2014-01-02 06:57:43 +0000 UTC]

Aww.  Thank you.  I know I sent you this clip a long time ago.  I had been wanting to do this picture for....well almost when I first thought of this story.  I started it several times but I'm not good at drawing horses so I could never get the pose right.  Then...I cheated.  Yes...I traced a horsie.  But I was finally able to do this picture!!!!  So I am unashamed!


I can't wait to read more Utopian stories from you as well!!!  I really want to see how the Antartica one turns out.    

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daisybtoes In reply to chill13 [2014-01-18 02:17:28 +0000 UTC]

You'll have to forgive me for being absent for so long.  My computer has been out of commission AGAIN for the last three weeks. I'm getting it back tomorrow afternoon, thank goodness, and right now I'm having to post with a little-bitty Kindle-fire, which is half the size of a tablet and a third the size of my laptop. So I'm  trying to keep it short.  By the way, I love your illusion of motion and animation on the legs of the horse.  That is a magnificent effect.  Talk to you tomorrow night...I hope.

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chill13 In reply to daisybtoes [2014-01-18 21:40:40 +0000 UTC]

I hate computer problems!!!  


Thanks!  I had so much fun with the blur tool.  I hadn't really used it much before so I had to mess around with it quite a bit before it looked right.

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daisybtoes In reply to chill13 [2014-01-19 03:14:59 +0000 UTC]

Computer will come home Monday.  Didn't get out today, I'm afraid.  So have a good weekend, and I will catch you Monday night.

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LaDeary [2013-12-17 21:03:55 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, that was epic! I like how you can really see the movement in the drawing because of the blurred edges. I find staying on an English saddle for the first time is challenging, so that must have been have been horrifying!

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chill13 In reply to LaDeary [2013-12-17 22:51:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!  Yeah, I had a lot of fun with the blur tool on this one

Poor Paramount.  He was already nervous around horses and this only confirmed his fears.  

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LaDeary In reply to chill13 [2013-12-18 01:44:48 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome as always. Horses know when you're nervous, which is probably why his was especially jumpy.

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chill13 In reply to LaDeary [2013-12-18 02:12:08 +0000 UTC]

Exactly right.  And now he's completely paranoid about them.  Actually, later on, getting chased by a horse ends up getting him lost in London.  A simple misunderstanding between him, the horse, and a bag of confections sends him running down the street and out of sight before Arthur (is son-in-law and bodyguard) even realizes he's gone. 

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LaDeary In reply to chill13 [2013-12-19 21:42:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh dear! XD Will you make a drawing or short story about that?

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chill13 In reply to LaDeary [2013-12-19 22:07:22 +0000 UTC]

Well, this will eventually be a many-chapters long fanfiction story.  I've been working on it for some time.  This is just a little piece of it that was finished and I couldn't help but illustrate.


And yes.  I will eventually have a picture of that.

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LaDeary In reply to chill13 [2013-12-20 00:54:45 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Can't wait! Your epic stories never fail to entertain me

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chill13 In reply to LaDeary [2013-12-20 04:12:32 +0000 UTC]

Awww.  Thanks.

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LaDeary In reply to chill13 [2013-12-20 15:31:00 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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TwilightKeyblade928 [2013-12-17 02:29:28 +0000 UTC]

I love the perspective in this one!  Very intense. I remember the first time I fell off of a horse. I hit the ground pretty hard, put I didn't break anything. Just bruises and such.

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chill13 In reply to TwilightKeyblade928 [2013-12-17 02:34:11 +0000 UTC]

My first horse ride was about like this.  Although I didn't actually fall off (I had a death-grip on the saddle horn) I DID tear a maple branch off with my neck.  Had a perfect little black and blue necklace for some time after.

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