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Published: 2019-01-15 16:02:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 2077; Favourites: 189; Downloads: 25
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For reyna-de-lewds (instagram)She is 25 years old and lives in the south of the USA. She works as a scaffolder for a construction company that specializes at building plant. Everything was going as any other day but was soon changed as an accident happened resulting in her right arm to be heavily damaged. With the doctors best efforts, they were not able to save her arm so a complete amputation was necessary. After a few years after her surgery, Amber was able to get herself the most advance bionic arm to help normalize her life.
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Comments: 14
yainedraws [2019-01-30 01:36:35 +0000 UTC]
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This piece is very pretty. I like the textured brushes you used, and also the color contrasts. The bright warm light on one side, and the cool light on another gives a nice effect. Her expression is also quite intriguing.
What I think could be improved is the proportions of her face - the way it is now, her face looks a little flat, since the eyes are a little too wide and far apart... Also, the blur is a little abrupt around her hair on (our) left side - it has a sharp edge between the blurred area and the focused area. I'd suggest changing that as well, making it all like the right side, where the blur is soft.
Overall, it is a beautiful piece, and she looks very mysterious!
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chirun In reply to yainedraws [2019-01-30 11:28:03 +0000 UTC]
Thank for the critique!
I kind of suspect that my monitor's contrast is too high, because some of the things (like, lines left from editing, etc.) I just don't see, unless pointed out.
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CrimsonWarden [2019-01-15 16:10:51 +0000 UTC]
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The work seems a bit rough but the roughness lends a degree of charm and mystery to the nature of the subject.
I love the solemn expressiveness in the eyes and the effect of neon freckles on the skin is a nice touch that compliments the near imperceptible smile
The only issue I personally find is the lack of vibrancy brought about by the choice of colors palette. The contrast and the spots of lighting are nicely placed and thought out but a bit more color is preferable to my taste.
All in all, its an admirable piece with an enjoyably calm mood to it.
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