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Published: 2017-07-24 21:03:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 7216; Favourites: 91; Downloads: 0
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Description The ship went down. Hard.
It's ancient systems screeched in alarm as soon as the tiny craft was clear of the Thunderflare's auxiliary hangar bay. Safety systems kicking in, it took me down to the nearest rock it could find. Still far out of the Goldilocks zone, much too close to the sun to support life. Although it must have at one point, there was an atmosphere.Β 
The craft was so unlikely to survive reentry to an atmosphere. I closed my eyes and awaited the end, but it didn't come. On the horizon a dot. Not another dune or rocky outcrop, something unnatural- a structure. Probably only dust, but still my only chance. Grabbing the manual controls was too much for the little snub-scout-ship, engines cut out before landing, the ejector seat still worked though. All supplies and provisions except one tiny canteen of water went up in flames with the remains of the ship. It's at least a couple of hours hike back to the structure I saw. Desert doesn't make for leisurely strolls, and the sun isn't even at it's apex yet. I doubt anyone will ever find my bones.
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Comments: 26

DelveArt3d [2017-09-09 13:08:28 +0000 UTC]

Great image. Which armor set is this?

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Chanteur-de-Vent [2017-08-02 08:48:50 +0000 UTC]

This is cool. Love the flares, the way we're staring into the sun and the feeling of immense heat it conveys. The symmetrical composition and her flowing hair creates a nice feeling of a "musical moment" when a big plot part is being revealed. You know, in this epic kind of way with changing perspective by zooming out. Beautiful.

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chrisryder123 In reply to Chanteur-de-Vent [2017-08-02 10:31:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :-DΒ 
I've never-ever played with flares before, but I knew something was missing and this just seemed to fit. I definitely felt like something big was about to happen, hence the next scene isn't up yet.

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Chanteur-de-Vent In reply to chrisryder123 [2017-08-02 12:06:33 +0000 UTC]

I need to try to play with flares now.

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chrisryder123 In reply to Chanteur-de-Vent [2017-08-02 17:05:55 +0000 UTC]

Dooo it!!

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Kooki99 [2017-07-30 16:50:08 +0000 UTC]

nice scene !
lighting is great i would have add a bit more bump/normals Β on the rocks but overall very nice

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chrisryder123 In reply to Kooki99 [2017-07-31 16:12:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :-D

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jmb200960 [2017-07-25 19:59:37 +0000 UTC]

Crashing in front of Jabba the Hut place, bad luck !

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chrisryder123 In reply to jmb200960 [2017-07-25 20:34:41 +0000 UTC]

I'm going to put off the temptation to make this a Star Wars story :-p

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JoePingleton [2017-07-25 18:17:37 +0000 UTC]

excellent scene and character, love the feeling of heat by really playing up the brightness of the light

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chrisryder123 In reply to JoePingleton [2017-07-25 20:34:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I tried adding an orange wash, but in the end this was the right choice.

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Dcow2004 [2017-07-25 15:27:01 +0000 UTC]

This looks like Destiny

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chrisryder123 In reply to Dcow2004 [2017-07-25 15:46:52 +0000 UTC]

PC-MasterRace. Never played it.

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Dcow2004 In reply to chrisryder123 [2017-07-25 18:41:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh ok

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Catweazle01 [2017-07-25 08:15:17 +0000 UTC]

phantastic render and cool light-effects.
This is what i am missing in my own pics

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chrisryder123 In reply to Catweazle01 [2017-07-25 20:35:21 +0000 UTC]

Lighting is the most difficult bit to get right, it makes or breaks the whole scene.

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1barefootwarrior [2017-07-25 05:52:05 +0000 UTC]

Awesomer...new word. I can only say it so much.Β  LOL, beautiful image. The lighting is excellent, well done.

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chrisryder123 In reply to 1barefootwarrior [2017-07-25 20:35:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :-D Means a lot.

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Dangerguy01 [2017-07-25 03:51:58 +0000 UTC]

Wow, awesome setting and lighting. Really conveys the sense of a hot desert planet a little too close to its star for comfort.

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chrisryder123 In reply to Dangerguy01 [2017-07-25 20:35:42 +0000 UTC]

:-D mission accomplished!Β 

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randomeye713 [2017-07-25 01:36:53 +0000 UTC]

Nice lens flares, that one director who is fond of lens flares would be impressed
...
JJ ABRAMS THAT'S WHO I'M THINKING OF
Couldn't think of his name for a second

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chrisryder123 In reply to randomeye713 [2017-07-25 20:36:02 +0000 UTC]

LOL. He can hire me for his next Blockbuster if he wants to.

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OneGearPhoto [2017-07-24 21:21:15 +0000 UTC]

Great story and love the renders.

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chrisryder123 In reply to OneGearPhoto [2017-07-25 20:36:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Appreciate it.

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TinyMan07 [2017-07-24 21:06:01 +0000 UTC]

Wished you've added a shot of her ejecting and then coming to this. having her just standing in front of a structure kinda takes the suspense out of it

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chrisryder123 In reply to TinyMan07 [2017-07-24 21:12:16 +0000 UTC]

There's so many scenes I wish I could do- I'm writing them down as I go and ticking them off but I'm already racing too far forward in my own head. I might go back later and back-fill some of them.

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