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i love this composition!!
awesome job...
just that even numbers arent to good to work
with. it's better to have an odd number of subjects
in the picture.
nonetheless, great shot!!
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Beautiful shot! composition is a million dollars perfect!
You asked for Advanced Critique..so im going to look at it for a momet and see what I can come up with....
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K here goes, I didnt find much I dont like about this photo its an extraodinary composition and good job getting that close, i scare them off everytime i try
I feel the 'whites' in this photo are just a touch weak and muted, I want to see them more vibrant and punchier a little bit of levels adjustment in photoshop or even better if you shoot in a *.Raw format bring up the brightness just a touch. [link] <--------Theres an example by one of my favorite deviant artists giliad that i would love to see this shot emulate along with colors and contrast
One more thing... The lines at the top, as they lead back are just a bit distracting to me, maybe cropping it just a little bit tighter to get rid of thoose major ripple lines.
But great work keep it up!
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Brilliant! That's the kind of simplicity I love. But I agree with everyone else, the 'C' really is distracting. Why's it there anyway? I assume it's the copyright symbol. You don't copyright all your photos, surely?
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thanks for the compliment.
yeah i try to. i work hard to get my shots,not to mention the money i spend on equipment. I don't want Joe blow going out and ripping them off because he is to lazy to go out and get them himself.
Christina
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Ah, protective over your photos I see. Do you sell prints then? Without the 'C' that is.
I'm not so protective, it's something I enjoy doing and I technically don't use MY equipment (because I don't have any) I use my dad's. So I guess that makes sense for me not to care if people take my photos.
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yeah I sell fine art prints, and when i have them printed i don't put the ccopywrite on them.
Chrisitna
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This is a brilliant shot, but that 'c' totally detracts from it. Maybe if it was smaller, or in one of the corners. Overall though, this is still a great photo.
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its emitting peacefulness. i like the way you captured them both.
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Very good photo, but I don't like the "C", I think it disturbes!
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what??? whattttt? did you manipulate this?
it's INCREDIBLE.
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nope no manipulation except the copywrite symbol and the frame.
Thanks.
Christina
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well yes i kind of figured that the copy right was a manipulation haha.
great work, i adore your gallery
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