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Published: 2008-01-08 20:41:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 10433; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 51
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Description My entry OC for 's Samurai Duelers League.

NAME: Tobae
AGE: 38
RACE: Human

WEAPONS: Tonfas. The shaft is made out of tempered steel with a wooden core and handle, and painted mahogany. Engraved at the top of the shafts are longevity and health on the other.

BACKGROUND: (Because his background story is too fantasy, I had to change it ;3) Tobae was a village watchman, protector, guardian. Until one spearman approached him, threating to pillage the village, rape the women and burn it down into ashes. A fight quickly ensued however Tobae was struck down by the man's weapon. His home, family and friends were gone but miraculously he survived. Scraping every last preserved item of the village, he built a shrine and swore revenge on the man, bearing his weapon still in his chest.

STORY/PURPOSE: During his journey for revenge, he showed his strength and ability against thugs attacking another village and impressed one of the members of the Hachiman family, and requested him to join. Tobae hopes that by participating in the league, he will have the chance to built up his strength and end his rage with the spearman dead in his hands. But while he seeks for revenge, he learns to be human again through friendship and forgiveness from his Family-members and opponents he faces.

EXTRA: Usually accompanied with him is a purple dragonfly (if you recognize or can even see the skull pattern on his sleeve, you'll know who the dragonfly is). He normally wears his kimono properly and covers his body with the sleeve-thing on top and wishes to find more articles of clothing to cover his legs and etc. (I drew it like this so you can kind of see the spearhead). He covers the spearhead with gauze, as well the area underneath it, so it can absorb the slowly oozing blood and prevent the wound from getting any infections. Occasionally he'll go into coughing fits because the spear pierced his right lung.

The Hachiman Family !
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Comments: 69

clickmon In reply to ??? [2009-04-16 08:13:40 +0000 UTC]

MAYBE!!! DUNDUNDUUUUUUUUUUUN!

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FoxNede In reply to clickmon [2009-04-22 07:07:40 +0000 UTC]

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kamethehermit [2008-04-30 14:16:29 +0000 UTC]

oh my, another hachiman i wanna duel
nice char!

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PrincessPrince [2008-01-25 03:40:20 +0000 UTC]

psst. Fight Balrogon for instant rank ups!~

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clickmon In reply to PrincessPrince [2008-01-25 03:51:33 +0000 UTC]

Who O_o?

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PrincessPrince In reply to clickmon [2008-01-25 04:07:42 +0000 UTC]

:3

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WieldtheKey [2008-01-11 19:06:53 +0000 UTC]

Duuude great character, awesome background! Love iiiiit. Great design, too

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clickmon In reply to WieldtheKey [2008-01-11 19:59:23 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you X3~~~

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Petitoe [2008-01-10 19:37:37 +0000 UTC]

...still in his chest xD wow

how long has it been in there? I'm kinda curious xD;

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clickmon In reply to Petitoe [2008-01-11 03:20:30 +0000 UTC]

Maybe 2-3 months?

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narutowannabe [2008-01-10 01:57:47 +0000 UTC]

TONFAS are the most underrated yet awesome thing in the world!! i love tis dualer. loff it!

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clickmon In reply to narutowannabe [2008-01-10 16:24:58 +0000 UTC]

MAKE ONE!!

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clickmon In reply to narutowannabe [2008-01-10 04:21:41 +0000 UTC]

X3~~~

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Ayatchi-Kun [2008-01-09 20:45:56 +0000 UTC]

*stupid laggy computer*
I think he's very pretty. I especially love the hat hanging off his belt.

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lanhao [2008-01-09 16:09:17 +0000 UTC]

wow, very nice char design!

dunno if it was approved, but welcome to the SDL, and looking forward to what you got

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clickmon In reply to lanhao [2008-01-09 17:29:46 +0000 UTC]

I doubt I will have any time. I was convinced to make one, that's all ;3

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lanhao In reply to clickmon [2008-01-09 23:08:11 +0000 UTC]

well it was good stuff either way

*pokes the knife in the chest* does it hurt when that happens?

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clickmon In reply to lanhao [2008-01-09 23:25:04 +0000 UTC]

It will sting for him. But any forceful tugging or twisting will hurt and eventually kill him if he doesn't stop the bleeding.

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lanhao In reply to clickmon [2008-01-10 01:30:47 +0000 UTC]

oof... awkward

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clickmon In reply to lanhao [2008-01-10 04:21:59 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, yeah XD

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lanhao In reply to clickmon [2008-01-10 20:43:01 +0000 UTC]

but the plus is that he has a place to hang his haori....

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clickmon In reply to lanhao [2008-01-11 03:18:49 +0000 UTC]

LOOOOOOOOL, human coat rack XD

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lanhao In reply to clickmon [2008-01-11 07:06:48 +0000 UTC]

yeah... it does have some practical uses ya know

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clickmon In reply to lanhao [2008-01-11 15:15:07 +0000 UTC]

Very much so ;3~

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lanhao In reply to clickmon [2008-01-11 20:44:46 +0000 UTC]

has he considered possibly switch the blade with a cork?

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clickmon In reply to lanhao [2008-01-11 21:08:45 +0000 UTC]

LOL, I don't think that's possible. If he pulls it out, he risks damaging his lung and other bodily organs and even paralysis since the base is near his spine. BUT, he can cork the blade so he doesn't poke someone's eyes out X3

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clickmon In reply to clickmon [2008-01-12 02:40:49 +0000 UTC]

Lol, did they have glue back then?

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lanhao In reply to clickmon [2008-01-12 02:22:35 +0000 UTC]

i meant put a cork in the hole... or maybe crazy glue... or... erm.... i dunno

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theCEOofDEATH [2008-01-09 13:25:49 +0000 UTC]

Leave it to you to create a guy who walks around with a pierced lung and a spear head stuck in him. Nice.

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clickmon In reply to theCEOofDEATH [2008-01-09 17:26:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks X3 You did help me conjure up the idea ;D

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theCEOofDEATH In reply to clickmon [2008-01-09 17:37:44 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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MaxkofValiant [2008-01-09 11:49:38 +0000 UTC]

My god, u were here...

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clickmon In reply to MaxkofValiant [2008-01-09 17:25:19 +0000 UTC]

Yeah but I won't have time to do battles. I just wanted to make a "card". That's all X3

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MaxkofValiant In reply to clickmon [2008-01-10 03:58:08 +0000 UTC]

Lol, is that so?xD

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septerranights [2008-01-09 06:01:41 +0000 UTC]

clickmon, your stuff is so badass!

love how you did the outfitting! better than perfect!


again. BADASS!!!!!!!

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clickmon In reply to septerranights [2008-01-09 06:43:07 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh, thanks X3

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kitsune2022 [2008-01-09 03:42:11 +0000 UTC]

*Squints at sleeve* Tiny skull... Well if Ross is a magpie and Kheller has purple hair does that make the dragonfly the violet chested wonder himself?

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clickmon In reply to kitsune2022 [2008-01-09 03:51:55 +0000 UTC]

Yes yes ;3~

Lol "violet chested wonder" X3

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lires [2008-01-09 03:04:18 +0000 UTC]

cool.. welcome to the team.. ^^

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clickmon In reply to lires [2008-01-09 03:28:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks <:3

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wansworld [2008-01-09 02:51:42 +0000 UTC]

he has a knife on his chest?

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clickmon In reply to wansworld [2008-01-09 03:15:58 +0000 UTC]

Read his description ;3

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blurukus [2008-01-09 01:02:05 +0000 UTC]

jeez now i feel like doin one

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clickmon In reply to blurukus [2008-01-09 01:04:44 +0000 UTC]

DO IT!

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Sebbythefreak [2008-01-08 23:56:13 +0000 UTC]

Nice, I'd say it's quite on borderline though, rather magical background thingy and all that...

But I'm not the one to judge

Welcome to the Hachiman team = D

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clickmon In reply to Sebbythefreak [2008-01-09 01:20:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks X3

I hope the official judges consider because the magical stuff is only in his background and not in his arsenal.

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Sebbythefreak In reply to clickmon [2008-01-09 03:37:45 +0000 UTC]

Yeah but it's still supposed to be a non magical universe.

To be honest, I find the magical background kinda superfluous. The spear part is really cool (being an element in many mythologies) and the dragonfly doesn't pose any problem and can be very interesting (especially since the team leader, NZcolumbiano (and his character Beel), LOVES bugs [so does I, actually]), but the shapeshifting and time travel aspects ain't bringing anything to your character.

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clickmon In reply to Sebbythefreak [2008-01-09 03:56:14 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I just wanted to give him some background but alas, I'm forced to change it. Which is fine for me, I have other story ideas brewing in my head ;3

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ink-imp In reply to clickmon [2008-01-10 21:47:53 +0000 UTC]

great stuff! hes got a bug as a companion!!!!!! >3> Its adorable! welcome to the team! Just a little correction on the description tough...Hachiman is not at all a family. Its merely an allience, we just happen to cuddle and hug cuz were KEWL. hehe, anyway, letting u know that since yer the eighth member youve attained the title of the eighth heavenly banner(8th founder) Hooray for u

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clickmon In reply to ink-imp [2008-01-11 03:18:02 +0000 UTC]

I know but family has a soft and fuzzy feeling in it X3

And thank you X3~~~

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