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Published: 2008-04-06 05:11:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 909; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 8
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Description Finally it's been a while I haven't uploaded a deviation.

So which to begin...
It's an entry for =Reveta 's contest.
It's Tick, her OC. (sorry I can't draw beard, haha )

Sorry the background seems little strange... XD Those lights floating around... under the rain... they are special lights I guess.

Hope you like it It really took a long time drawing the background. x_x You can post critiques if you like, that would help alot.

Time: I dunno, it took a long time
Tool: Adobe Photoshop 7.0 / Wacom Tablet


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Scrapped on Dec 17 2010 =v=
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Comments: 49

Sitraxis [2008-04-21 00:49:37 +0000 UTC]

Ok lang yan! the background fits the situation like Edvard Munch's The Scream!

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xiou [2008-04-09 06:42:00 +0000 UTC]

Heya Coco, great job, as always. I really love all the detail you put into the background, in my opinion, it is the true 'character' of this drawing. Even before I really paid any attention to the OC, I noticed all the small touches in the back, like the contrast between the lighter grass and all the slight moon light refractions off the petals in the trees.

Since you mentioned you were looking for critique though.. the thing that I think might give this drawing much more depth, is if you darkened the trees/grass and maybe some leaves in the far far back. I think if you were to darken those areas, it will make the scenery sort of fade into the darkness and make it seem like the drawing stretches on further, instead of just ending 2-3 rows of trees into the forest. (for instance, if you look at the grass at the very far far back, it looks like it is floating in the air, might be better to just black the whole area out.)

Just my opinion though.

You are really improving and doing an amazing job. Keep up the good work

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Cocokun In reply to xiou [2008-04-09 07:06:35 +0000 UTC]

!!!! Definitely a long comment and critique.
Tis' okay, your critique really helped alot, and your opinion is right! I'll do better next time. ^^

Thanks!!!

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xiou In reply to Cocokun [2008-04-10 00:59:31 +0000 UTC]

Sorry about that, I didn't mean for it to be so lengthy. My one critique about depth was just really hard to describe accurately (and I hate it when someone critiques and says something broad/lame like; it looks weird, or something else just as stupid). I really liked it a lot, just thought that little bit might help contribute to your already diverse artistic repertoire

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Kasucia [2008-04-06 22:06:07 +0000 UTC]

absolutely awesome x3

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Cocokun In reply to Kasucia [2008-04-07 11:28:54 +0000 UTC]

x3 Thanks!!!

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Kasucia In reply to Cocokun [2008-04-07 21:31:07 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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lunarisplendere [2008-04-06 20:45:14 +0000 UTC]

The background is especially lovely. It really adds to the scene! Plus, the way you drew the character is adorable. :3

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Cocokun In reply to lunarisplendere [2008-04-07 11:28:44 +0000 UTC]

Waaai~ Thank you!!!

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WonderPotato [2008-04-06 18:50:08 +0000 UTC]

I love the hair so muich. <33

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Cocokun In reply to WonderPotato [2008-04-07 11:28:26 +0000 UTC]

XD Thanks, glad you love the hair so much!

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Bluecresentmoon [2008-04-06 16:54:20 +0000 UTC]

i think the lights look like fireflies~ *w*
The dark parts on the ground look too dark;
If it's dirt, it might be okay, but I thought it was water at first.
The trees seem to be all the same size; You should have differnt sized tress
(young, short trees, and wide, tall trees)
i think Tick's hair should have more shadows and be darker-
Compared to the dark forest he's in, it looks a little strange.

But deffinitly one of the more cuter entrys.

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Cocokun In reply to Bluecresentmoon [2008-04-07 11:28:09 +0000 UTC]


I'll try to draw trees at different sizes.
I know but i'm dumbfounded on how to make Tick's hair and skin be darker.... I'll make an effort to Tick's hair and skin darker, thank you!

lol thanks!!

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Bluecresentmoon In reply to Cocokun [2008-04-07 21:11:42 +0000 UTC]

I guess you could just use darker shades of the colors you used~ ^^
Your very welcome! C:

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animeanimal [2008-04-06 14:54:48 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! He's so pretty ^^
The time taken on the background was SOOO worth it!!
Well done!
x

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Cocokun In reply to animeanimal [2008-04-07 11:30:38 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, he ish pretty!

Thank you!!!

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animeanimal In reply to Cocokun [2008-04-07 12:48:43 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome! -hug-

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naruhinatidusyuna [2008-04-06 11:57:04 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is amazing!

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Cocokun In reply to naruhinatidusyuna [2008-04-07 11:29:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! I love your avatar!

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czaren [2008-04-06 11:32:18 +0000 UTC]

ZOMG IT"S REALLY LOVELYYY
Hehe~! I love the background the most! It's not weird at all! Very pretty.
And like, you drew your friend's OC very well ;o; The clothes look cool OwO!!
Those floaty light things are cute!
I hope that you'll win!
LOL critique? xDD Ehm, you can make the skin darker since the bg is actually night time or sth'. xD I think! And like, make it brighter in some areas 'coz there are floaty light things there. : D That's all~! But, I think it's great! -picture-

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Cocokun In reply to czaren [2008-04-07 11:32:39 +0000 UTC]

Yeeeeey thank you for the like the nicest comment!!!

I hope so too
Ahh, you're right! But I dunno how to make the skin darker... I'm used to drawing and CGing without following the rules for light source But, I'll try, thank you for the critique!!

Thanks for the fav!

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czaren In reply to Cocokun [2008-04-07 11:41:50 +0000 UTC]

No problem ;o; ;o; You give super kind comments so I only give back the favor xDD
Aaaah~
Okay ! [ZOMG you use the cutest emoticons/avvies xDD]
Thank YOU for accepting the critique! Some people get mad at me when I give such comments



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AnimeAngelDNA [2008-04-06 10:47:35 +0000 UTC]

aww :awww: thats real cute

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Cocokun In reply to AnimeAngelDNA [2008-04-07 11:24:54 +0000 UTC]

lolz, thank you!!

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AnimeAngelDNA In reply to Cocokun [2008-04-07 11:49:41 +0000 UTC]

yw

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Keiji-kun [2008-04-06 10:46:39 +0000 UTC]

kaze-hime's blossom tutorial really kicked up to action! like it!
*acts like a fool and goes off drooling*
yay!

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Cocokun In reply to Keiji-kun [2008-04-07 11:24:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah her tutorial did! Glad you like it!

Yay!

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Keiji-kun In reply to Cocokun [2008-04-10 14:19:34 +0000 UTC]

KazeHime-sama!

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xFannyx [2008-04-06 10:43:11 +0000 UTC]

aww, that's awesome I really love it

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Cocokun In reply to xFannyx [2008-04-07 11:23:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!!

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xFannyx In reply to Cocokun [2008-04-07 16:13:23 +0000 UTC]

You're really welcome

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SunDay42 [2008-04-06 09:30:58 +0000 UTC]

Amazing I really liked the way u did the trees!!!

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Cocokun In reply to SunDay42 [2008-04-07 11:23:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!! Trees are worth doing!

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sheewie [2008-04-06 09:22:39 +0000 UTC]

blue eyes! ooooo the colour of trees are cool
xDD

he got no eyebrow? O.O

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Cocokun In reply to sheewie [2008-04-07 11:22:56 +0000 UTC]

Yep blue eyes

OH! I forgot to draw eyebrows.... lolz it's my habit for not drawing eyebrows

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sheewie In reply to Cocokun [2008-04-07 15:37:26 +0000 UTC]

oo really?
i didn't notice ur habit

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twilight-inochihime [2008-04-06 09:05:55 +0000 UTC]

OMG.... Kawaii desu!!!

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Cocokun In reply to twilight-inochihime [2008-04-07 11:21:25 +0000 UTC]

Arigatou ^__^

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twilight-inochihime In reply to Cocokun [2008-04-08 04:58:53 +0000 UTC]

no prob^^

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ElaryWakefield [2008-04-06 08:10:45 +0000 UTC]

AWWWWWWWW OMG HE IS SOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE <3

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Cocokun In reply to ElaryWakefield [2008-04-07 11:21:09 +0000 UTC]

Haha, cuteness overload!

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aprilsierra [2008-04-06 07:59:40 +0000 UTC]

Aww~! How cute~!

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Cocokun In reply to aprilsierra [2008-04-07 11:20:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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aprilsierra In reply to Cocokun [2008-04-07 16:43:24 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome~!

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dark-klaus [2008-04-06 06:37:04 +0000 UTC]

the background is really really nice.. and his eyes.. *______*

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Cocokun In reply to dark-klaus [2008-04-07 11:20:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!!

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dark-klaus In reply to Cocokun [2008-04-07 11:26:51 +0000 UTC]

np ^^

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SasoriDanna94 [2008-04-06 06:15:19 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing...and the background is especially beautiful~!! Definitely a fav

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Cocokun In reply to SasoriDanna94 [2008-04-07 11:18:29 +0000 UTC]

Yeeey~!!! Thank you for the nice comment and the fav!!!

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