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Published: 2013-02-20 04:38:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 508; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 2
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the last panel looks really bad... critiques anyone?Related content
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I have little room to speak but the proportions could use some work.
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It's not bad, just try not to make the background so busy, and maybe modify the field of vision a little. But good job, practice makes perfect.
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thank you for the advice! IAMFILLEDWITHKNOWLEDGE.
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Lol! xD I really like it, the panels are drawn well but a bit too loosely coloured so it looks messy. :/ Otherwise, it's really good!
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thanks, i will try to color neatly next time! XD
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