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he is a boy devoid of sharp colours, riseslike a distant sun fragmented through city
smoke plumes, he paints skies grey, he
dilutes turquoise seas, he is always a shade
of nothing. his girl, she dresses him in clown
colours, masks the void with scarlet smiles
and peacock feathers, but the hues all fade
under his watercolour touch. i used to love
him, but he stripped even the lightest shades
of happiness down to something faded,
something missing. dreams in greyscale,
life in sepia, i ate blood oranges and painted
my skin pomegranate and clashed so
beautifully with his frown i think he forgot to
cry when i left, dressed in theatre costumes
and his girl blazing by his side, her seeing life
rose-tinted, him as anything but miserable and
me as something more dangerous than
depression.
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Comments: 9
ObsydianDreamer [2015-09-27 00:27:37 +0000 UTC]
Brilliant poem. I especially love the imagery you've created.
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comatose-comet In reply to ObsydianDreamer [2015-09-27 20:50:40 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much
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RattledFawn [2015-09-24 23:05:28 +0000 UTC]
This is so beautiful. I love the play on all the colors
and the description of "his watercolour touch"
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comatose-comet In reply to RattledFawn [2015-09-27 20:51:05 +0000 UTC]
thank you for your lovely comments, they really made my day have a wonderful day~
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RattledFawn In reply to comatose-comet [2015-09-28 16:14:42 +0000 UTC]
you're very welcome, dear! it was a wonderful piece
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