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Published: 2015-09-20 22:33:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 738; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 0
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Description he is a boy devoid of sharp colours, rises
like a distant sun fragmented through city
smoke plumes, he paints skies grey, he
dilutes turquoise seas, he is always a shade
of nothing. his girl, she dresses him in clown
colours, masks the void with scarlet smiles
and peacock feathers, but the hues all fade
under his watercolour touch. i used to love
him, but he stripped even the lightest shades
of happiness down to something faded,
something missing. dreams in greyscale,
life in sepia, i ate blood oranges and painted
my skin pomegranate and clashed so
beautifully with his frown i think he forgot to
cry when i left, dressed in theatre costumes
and his girl blazing by his side, her seeing life
rose-tinted, him as anything but miserable and
me as something more dangerous than
depression.
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Comments: 9

ObsydianDreamer [2015-09-27 00:27:37 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant poem. I especially love the imagery you've created.

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comatose-comet In reply to ObsydianDreamer [2015-09-27 20:50:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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ObsydianDreamer In reply to comatose-comet [2015-09-28 10:06:43 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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RattledFawn [2015-09-24 23:05:28 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful. I love the play on all the colors
and the description of "his watercolour touch"

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comatose-comet In reply to RattledFawn [2015-09-27 20:51:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you for your lovely comments, they really made my day have a wonderful day~

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RattledFawn In reply to comatose-comet [2015-09-28 16:14:42 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome, dear! it was a wonderful piece

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joshdlerman [2015-09-21 05:42:48 +0000 UTC]

i want to cry now
 

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comatose-comet In reply to joshdlerman [2015-09-23 20:58:32 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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joshdlerman In reply to comatose-comet [2015-09-24 00:21:01 +0000 UTC]

 

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