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Drawn in manga format, read right to left.
GAH! I know I'm late again! Sorry guys! >.<;;
This page took a looooot more work than most before it, obvious reason is by looking at it. It has many different comic panels, and effects, that made it difficult and not to mention it was tough to touch up and draw what is in the panels.
Here we have the war starting, I'm mad at myself for not drawing out each soldier, but it would take an excessively long time to finish it if I did. Not too pleased with the overall look of the page, however.
It should be noted, that this page was done more recently than the others, this is the first "newer" page of the series where the quality improves. My favorite aspect of it is the shot of them running up the stairs, so cinematic.
*EDIT*
I FORGOT TO EDIT THE PANELS!
This is one of the few pages that we did when the panels weren't really in a manga format, meaning they didn't read read right to left properly. SORRY FOR THE INCONVENIENCE!!
As always tell us what you think! ^^
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Comments: 18
Feles-Alata [2010-02-11 13:56:36 +0000 UTC]
Ah, sorry, dude I forgot to comment it... I'll be sure to write the comment qiucker next time.
When I saw it first, I forgot it was a manga, so I started to read like usual. The first row went smoothly, but then the panels' order became confusing Now when I read it in the right order, the events are clear to me. I wonder what's on the top if that hill, hmm?
Yeah, the quality is definetely improved ^^ I like the background on the last panel, looks awesome even in black-and white
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Cornelious-Raidon In reply to Feles-Alata [2010-02-12 11:34:51 +0000 UTC]
Oh don't worry about not commenting on time. XD I didn't upload the page on time, and I still haven't critiqued the cover XD So no worries lol
Yea, when I first did this page I thought the panels were correct, but when I looked at it again, and actually tried to read it, the first two panels were switched lol.
It's something me and Zex are not terribly good at lol We have the tendency to keep some panels in Western Format, and do the rest in Eastern Format. x_X It's hard to get right, and I'm almost considering doing the whole comic in Western Format just because it's easier, and make it look like a manga as best we can.
And thanks! The background was hard to get the toning right, still it's a bit off, but it's a lot better than when we first started on the page. lol
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Feles-Alata In reply to Cornelious-Raidon [2010-02-12 12:17:09 +0000 UTC]
I know in my country translators sometimes flip pages horisontally to switch from japanese format to western format. I myself have trouble with reading in japanese format, since I grew up on western comics, nor I can do the panneling right That's why I sometimes end up with reading fancomics wrong way.
I think you should do it just the way you're comfortable with. If you can work in manga format, you may stick with it, but if you feel it would be better to keep it in western one, I think you can do a western format with manga-styled shading (I saw a bunch of comics that were done like it)
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Cornelious-Raidon In reply to Feles-Alata [2010-02-14 01:27:20 +0000 UTC]
I could do that yes, I might end up doing that before too long. lol
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Ender-Sammi [2010-02-09 21:42:44 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Nice work! It looks so amazing...and the effects... Can't wait to see more from you!
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Miss-Riza [2010-02-08 14:39:25 +0000 UTC]
I guess I'm sort of at a loss for words. AMAZING PAGE IS AMAZING. >:U
I think I see the outline of Azukaru impaling someone in the background lol. XD
No worries about not drawing out each soldier, that takes a lot of work to put in detail like that. I think it looks fine the way it is.
I think I agree with you. That last panel just looks awesome. The moon being so large in the background is just EPIC. lol. Also I love the background in that panel in general.
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Cornelious-Raidon In reply to Miss-Riza [2010-02-09 11:33:53 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it. There's still some stuff I'm not terribly good at though, the main thing being speedlines again. XD But everything else came out pretty okay.
It seems weird though.... not a lot of people commented on this page yet. I wonder why? o.o I hope peeps aren't losing interest!
Also, FEAR THE MOON!
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Miss-Riza In reply to Cornelious-Raidon [2010-02-09 15:06:18 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry, this seems like it's going to be a long series, so you have plenty of time to practice
I noticed there weren't very many comments when I posted... Hm... /snaps fingers because she got an idea/ You need more publicity! /runs off and prints EC T-shirts and Coffee Mugs/
Half the moon is gone? Whaddaya mean half the moon is gone?
Ah such fond memories /looks away to the distance with a dreamy look on face/
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Cornelious-Raidon In reply to Miss-Riza [2010-02-12 11:39:50 +0000 UTC]
LMAO SA2 REFERENCE!
I knows it'll be pretty long, it just kinda sucks when I think about it atm, a lot of people who normally comment and fave DIDN'T and it gets me worried. D: I read Bakuman a lot and that's kinda like a guide to being a mangaka and already the book has some MASSIVE similarities between me and Zex, as in a lot of stuff that happened to them, the main two characters in the story, has happened to us. One of the things that happened to thme, was that their first action type manga failed to get readers and high ratings and had to go under.
I really wish I could make T-Shirts and coffee mugs lol I think my one class teaches me had to make iron on transfers so I can make a few shirts maybe lol, and they definitely teach how to make a sweet coffee mug.
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Miss-Riza In reply to Cornelious-Raidon [2010-02-12 14:33:53 +0000 UTC]
LOL YES >:U
I kind of know what you mean... that story (the on-going, never-ending, mother-of-all-fan-fictions) that Shaye and I have been writing since seventh grade scarily has a lot of similarities to Twilight... which is just fuckin scary. I don't read the series. Shaye doesn't read the series. We HATE Twilight all together. I was talling one of my friends about the storyline and she was all "OMG that's like, exactly what's happening to Bella!". So I was all /Vader Voice/ "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...." And so I wrote a note to Shaye and I was like "Ok. We need to figure out who's going to be with Rachel permanently. We need to de-vampire Biru, And we need to make sure we never EVER include anything related to vampires ever EVER again D:"
lol. I make t-shirt designs a lot. I have transfer sheets at home and I can print them out lol. As soon as I get a white t-shirt, I'm going to make one with the SEGA logo on the front across the chest lol.
"...Dude, you're staring at my boobs."
"No I'm not. I'm staring at the SEGA logo thats... oooh Sorry."
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Cornelious-Raidon In reply to Miss-Riza [2010-02-14 01:32:07 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow I hate Twilight too XD Dumb story for gay vampires lol
You should totally make an EC shirt if you want too~
I can give you a pic of the title art if you want it?
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Miss-Riza In reply to Cornelious-Raidon [2010-02-14 02:14:50 +0000 UTC]
Dude that would be awesome!
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Cornelious-Raidon In reply to Miss-Riza [2010-02-14 12:34:05 +0000 UTC]
Okies, just whenever you're on MSN I can send ya it.
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KaiThePhaux [2010-02-07 20:45:51 +0000 UTC]
It's so Manga-ey! I love it! The tail position in the last panel is perfect! Nice work with the shading, too!
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Cornelious-Raidon In reply to KaiThePhaux [2010-02-07 21:01:15 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you think so, thanks! ^^ Though I messed up here and there.
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