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crateshya — Anata no Kokoro wo Kiku 1

Published: 2009-05-25 00:15:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 781; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description I know there's something in the wake of your smile,
I get a notion from the look in your eyes, yeah,
You built a love, but that love falls apart,
Your little piece of heaven
Turns too dark...

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Three part series for 's contest. This is the first page. :3 'Tis Emi and (Takano) Masao.

[BACKGROUND INFO FROM PROJECT CLICHE]
Emi fell in love with a guy named Kazuki in America. Both of their parents (who are rich), thought it would be a good idea to have the two get married. Kazuki, though, didn't quite like Emi as much as Emi liked him, so he ran off to Japan. Emi followed him, and found out that he had found a new girl, Yuuko, to love. During her wild attempts to get him back, she had a bodyguard hired from [I'm assuming] her parents. That would be Masao. Despite their best efforts both in love and in professionalism, they end up falling for each other. :3

After readin' a little about the two and their backgrounds, I kinda wanted to do something that was a bit on the sad, yet endlessly romantic side. (I'm way too much of a romantic person, believe it or not.) One of the things that makes ME swoon is the cliche scene when X lover is upset that Z lover doesn't care about her, and then Y secret lover consoles the sobbing X lover because he really loves her. I dunno. Maybe that's me, but it's SO. CUTE. I can't stand it! I'm sorry, I'm a hopeless romantic.

I need to work on side angles more. I've noticed that I'm actually pretty bad at them most of the time. Serious. I got my 45/30/60/80 down, I just gotta get that really nice 90 degree rotation. Um, yeah, and don't mind the endlessly horrible 100 degree angle down the bottom. This was kinda like my first time trying to tackle it and I failed miserably. ^^'; Sorry for kinda raping your character designs a little, Blizz!

I'm kinda liking how the coloring came out for this. :3 I haven't really messed with the pressure-sensitive opacity before (just used brush-size pressure-sensitivity), but I kinda like this better rather than messing with opacity manually. Grandted, I still do that but yeah. It helps a little bit still.

DOES IT LOOK PROFESSIONAL? LET ME KNOW.

WHY DID I HAVE TO SCRIPT TWO MORE PAGES OF THIS ASDF I WANNA BE DONE BUT THEY ALL HAVE TO BE IN COLOR.

Emi, Masao and Project Cliche belong to .
Art and scripting to moi.
Lyrics are from Listen To Your Heart by Roxette.
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Comments: 12

Blizz-Mii [2009-05-30 01:32:02 +0000 UTC]

WHOAAAAAAAAAA.

I am amazed and impressed and touched by the amount of effort you put into this!! * A* There is so much detail in the art, and the scripted storyline is spot on characterization-wise. It's beautiful! I really like how you did the wistful looks and annoyed expressions in this page. >w<

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crateshya In reply to Blizz-Mii [2009-05-30 02:07:49 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you! I'm very glad you like it. I did work pretty hard on all three (What can I say? I wanna win, lol!). But, hur hur, what scripted storyline? I BSed my way through it. ;D

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DashNakeshi [2009-05-25 00:48:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm impressed by all of the coloring work here. It's all simple, yet appealing to the eye. I really dig all the greenery in the background, too... it looks lush. x3

Also, yay for hopeless romantic points. I knew that this would be something like it ever since I saw the first line of the comic, not gonna lie hahaha. Nothing wrong with it though. :3

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crateshya In reply to DashNakeshi [2009-05-25 01:46:41 +0000 UTC]

Hee, thanks. That's like...my first time really tackling greenery in such abundancy. Or something.

Hopeless romantisists unite, LOL! But seriously, my inner tomboy's going NUTS at me right now. XD

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DashNakeshi In reply to crateshya [2009-05-25 03:58:31 +0000 UTC]

Your inner tomboy can shut it for a while.

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crateshya In reply to DashNakeshi [2009-05-26 01:08:49 +0000 UTC]

I guess so.

Tomboy self: Meeeeeeeeeeeeh *flips the birdy*

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DashNakeshi In reply to DashNakeshi [2009-05-25 00:48:28 +0000 UTC]

LOL I forgot to say, overall nice job!

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crateshya In reply to DashNakeshi [2009-05-25 01:47:26 +0000 UTC]

I thought that was kinda assumed, but thanks!

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Pomishians [2009-05-25 00:24:17 +0000 UTC]

Sweet. I really like all the detail, can't wait to see the other pages

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crateshya In reply to Pomishians [2009-05-25 01:48:19 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, thank you! The other two will be (hopefully) up within the next 4 or 5 days. X3

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Pomishians In reply to crateshya [2009-05-25 12:12:50 +0000 UTC]

I will definitely check back!

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crateshya In reply to Pomishians [2009-05-26 01:08:20 +0000 UTC]

Hee, thank you. :3

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