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CrimsonSummer — Mercy-Chapter 5-Pg 22
Published: 2013-06-29 15:08:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 2305; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 13
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I loved it! Wow. I love the emotion displayed by Natsuki.
I'm sure Shizuru is blown away by this confession!
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natsuki was overwhelmed by her love for shizuru after kissing her lol
What will shizuru do?
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I'm sure in general view:
be surprised but welcome her with open arms.
I do like fanfiction and doujinishi.
You are allowed to go beyond story
in the things we often wonder, with it. ^^
So, I get fascinated with how others write it,
since I too have my own sense of creativity.
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Great page again but you have made a grammar mistake on the second frame. It's supposed to be "I'm just a girl you WERE in love with but,"
I know it's not a big deal and people can still get the meaning but it sounds weird and grammar shouldn't get in the way of the perfection of this page 
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Oh yea I've realized, drawing at 2am in the morning didn't help.
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Yeah, I understand. I wouldn't have bothered pointing it out if it was the key element of that speech.
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You should point it out lol, I always make careless mistakes
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10x? And it's only been few days lol
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Few days = calamity! \m/
Can't wait the next installment!
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