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Frizzy feels and fiery blue aurasA black disc spins its colorful hues.
A weave, a whirl of music twirls,
And dreams condense from steaming stews.
The Tower. The Gypsy. A melodic tune
Draws me in some trappy clamp.
I’ll ponder and quest behind the glass
Of my old fashioned lava lamp.
But soon the bridge begins to burn,
When father screams, “FIVE FIFTY THREE!”
I kick the stars off of my bed
When the “real world” comes to trouble me.
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Day-Dreamer07 [2007-07-14 13:51:47 +0000 UTC]
*sigh*..ah yes...life...
I’ll ponder and quest behind the glass
Of my old fashioned lava lamp.
you need to write more poetry.
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cubecrazy2 In reply to Day-Dreamer07 [2007-07-15 03:10:50 +0000 UTC]
Aw thanks a ton! I love poetry! I haven't been writing to often which I'd like to change. I was thinking about compiling a book of poems and illustrations and totally forgot about it. Thanks for the inspiration, I'll have to get back to work on it!
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cubecrazy2 In reply to Day-Dreamer07 [2007-07-16 01:18:07 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! Thanks! I'll try and keep ya posted on the progress!
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Fyorl [2007-03-13 19:58:20 +0000 UTC]
I never understand poetry ¬_¬
But it still sounded nice and jolly and I liked that bit
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cubecrazy2 In reply to Fyorl [2007-03-13 22:50:51 +0000 UTC]
I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on it!
My poetry tends to not make much sense. Its really a bunch of abstractions on abstractions that delutes a simple meaning.
Thanks for checking it out!
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Fyorl In reply to cubecrazy2 [2007-03-13 23:51:30 +0000 UTC]
Ah well that would explain it then...
Heh, no problem
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cubecrazy2 In reply to sezzabell [2007-03-11 01:57:07 +0000 UTC]
We may even be neighbors haha! Thanks so much for the fav deary!
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cubecrazy2 In reply to semievilchicky [2007-03-11 01:55:26 +0000 UTC]
I love to dream, and man... sometimes I get these spinning kaliedescope colors, I think part of it depends on my sugar level... but the biggest factor is music. I've always been able to see color in my dreams... or at least pick out colors in my dream.
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hungryfreak [2007-03-10 06:23:57 +0000 UTC]
Cool. You should play and sing these and post recordings!
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cubecrazy2 In reply to hungryfreak [2007-03-11 01:48:26 +0000 UTC]
That would be awesome... I don't have the musical talent or the proper recording stuff to make that possible. I would love to mess around with a keyboard, or guitar, or accordian... hahaha. I'm pumped cause Elkhorn flea markets are getting closer and closer, I usually always see an accordian when I go. My one music buddy was going to work on some tunes for my poems but that did happen. He said he was used to working the other way... I dunno..
If you want to take a stab at some tunes and signing and stuff be my guest! I'd love to hear what you come up with.
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inneryoung [2007-03-10 06:20:20 +0000 UTC]
that was awesome!
i like the "old fashioned lava lamp" line
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cubecrazy2 In reply to inneryoung [2007-03-11 01:44:07 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thanks! I've been trying to think of a clever way to work a lava lamp into a poem. I like the way it turned out.
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erikakochanski [2007-03-10 04:15:49 +0000 UTC]
"I kick the stars off of my bed." << I LOVE THAT LINE!!! Love the poem! ~E.
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cubecrazy2 In reply to erikakochanski [2007-03-11 01:43:24 +0000 UTC]
EEEEeeeee I love that line so much too!!! I actually have a blanket with stars on it... it was a big joke a long time ago... I would tell people that I slept with the stars. Anywho... kind of a silly inside double meaning with that line. Thanks so much Emmy! *big honking hug*
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erikakochanski In reply to cubecrazy2 [2007-03-11 02:39:01 +0000 UTC]
*big honkin' hug back at ya* ~E.
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cubecrazy2 In reply to ShuxRei [2007-03-11 01:41:00 +0000 UTC]
WOW!
You make me happy too!
*big honkin hug*
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ShuxRei In reply to cubecrazy2 [2007-03-11 04:25:50 +0000 UTC]
YAAAAY!!!! *huge hug in return*
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