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Published: 2008-08-06 03:08:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 16230; Favourites: 108; Downloads: 128
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Starting Line --Reverse --ForwardRound 1, vs. ~Lunacat-chan in *Sins-Of-Angels 's tournament Law of Talos.
I thought it might help keep me motivated to upload each double page as I finish them, so here's the first. The next is inked but I probably won't get around to coloring it soon since I really need to work more on responsible stuff >.>; This round doesn't end until the 20th anyway. I always enter a sorta weird state when I'm drawing a ton on these things. Like I don't like or dislike this page, I'm just so focused on the next one. *becomes a robot*
On a side note, while drawing I've been half-watching the Titans of Teen. I'm almost done with season 2. It ain't bad for a kids show! XD I mean yeah it's all cheesy and kiddish, but it's convenient, silly, and in English for while I'm working >.>; Robin's the best, 'cause he's so srs bsns.
Someday when I'm a money-having independent gal I shall try American comic books. I love reading about the mythos of superhero comics and stuff but I've never actually tried reading them. Someday!
EDIT: oh yeah, any German speakers willing to help me with the occasional random German phrases Steffi spurts out? XD
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I really like your comic. It's very cute. Nice job. ^_^
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I'd love to help you out with the German phrases!
Example when limb, robo, etc broke:
"Elende, blΓΆde, stinkende, verroste BlechbΓΌchse!"
And every one of those words is comatible with children
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If you don't mind, fixing it afterwards. π: 0 β©: 1
Your style gives me cavities and like all sweet and cute stuff, I love it XD
it's full of life and expressions ^^
! Ooh
I don't wanna risk messing with it at this point (plus the English in < >'s at least lets English speakers know what she's sayin xD ) But I will definitely be poking you next round for some advice, probably >3>
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haha, yeah, give the judges time to work what they have now.
keeping the < > are actually a good idea. No need to translate it in a comment or so, but still visually acknowledgeable as other language.
Keep it up ^^
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Looks awesome! The new girl looks good too 
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Well; Mine's limited.
Verdamit - God-Damnit.
Nein - No
Achtung - Warning
Da - Yes
Mein Godt- My God.
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Oooh, Gothish lady's dress is so pretty! =O lolz *goes to look up what Steffi said*
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How cute! I love the last panel.
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βͺ ~ When all alone in my sleep, I just go about dreaming. I see myself there, having the same adventure. ~ βͺ
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I'm not a German speaker, but I can help you with random easy German quotes if you want XD (Ich spreche ein bissen Deutsch ... but I fail at writing, when I don't focus. Like now. XD)
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I feel stupid, cause I really don't know much of Steffi, but why does she randomly blurt stuff out in german? I'm curious to know!
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Her first language is German, so when she blurts stuff out it tends to be her default. XD
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Ok! That explains it! Thanks! ^.^
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Very nice...
Hehe, Miss Gothish...
And if you want, I could help you with the German, I'm part German myself and live in Germany, it's also my one native language aside English.
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I wish I could help with german, that's the language I want to speak the most right away >,< All I can say is willkommen and wonderbar, knowing what I'm talking about
But, coolio as always! That's gonna be interesting, a german girl fighting a goth on a giant kiwi-bot (SP!!). Good victory! (I'm so sure you will win I didn't even wish you luck, see how awesome you are?) : D
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haha, as expected of you, total cuteness! i like the simple layout of your panels
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seeing a pink haired girl in a giant metal kiwi chasing a metal bird robot and shouting German at it is one of the funniest things i can think of
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Hahaha! Coincedence, bird bots match! 8DDDDDD
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haha, stop, I need you! Like her boyfriend left her
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ZOMG! She's gonna turn that lil' robo-bird into... her leg?! xDDD So silly and so cute! >w<
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I know I mention it a lot, but I just love Steffi more and more each page. *fav*
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Aw I love little Narida! Very cute. I can't wait to see the next few pages.
Good luck~! ^.^
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And this is proof you shall own this competition!
Everyone needs a robot bird. Not just Steffi there.
Amercian comic suggestion?: Thunderbolts. I heart Penance and Moonstone! Venom is in it too.
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AWWW
You draw Neri and her birds so cute!
I am dying of cute.
No, seriously.
8D
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aww glad you approve xD She's definitely the opponent I've had the most trouble figuring out how to portray D:
Are you back in business by the way? I heard about your evacuation @3@
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Yup, back in business. That day did suck though.
I think you've got her spot-on.
"Oh! You have a bird-bot too! 8D Only....yours...is really big. o_o"
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Awesome sauce.
So early too. ^__^
Keep at it and stuff
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oh my god the cuteness its eating my head
Once again great job on this.
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xD Need the birdy? Geez, Steffi is resourceful...but...xD She really looks like the type to go on a rampage for that stuff.
So cute though, >w< As usual...xDD;
I anticipate more from...robot-suika?! O_O;;;
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Affirmative, beep beep!
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I'll give you some good one shots to read in American comic-dom. I find it hard to get into the series myself. Nice comic pages. Looking forward to the rest.
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One word...
AWSOME!
I can't wait to read more pages!
You know so I understand more of what is going on!
Its very well drawn as well!
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