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Description The Fire Still Burns

"Holy-!!" Hayate dived out of the way, a neko posterior crashing down where he had been standing just moments before.

"Go AWAY!" Leena shouted, cutting down another neko with her claws before she spun, decking another enemy with a swift kick to the face. Kri stood in the house, several paces behind Leena, battling an axe wielding feline warrior with her naginata. Her enemy, decked from head to toe in steel armor, waded through her blows with impunity, an axe strike cleaving through a wall, inches below Kri's diving head. She rolled on the floor, her naginata out defensively in front of her.

"What do you want with me?" Kri muttered, watching her slow enemy closely. At the entrance to the house, Leena leaped over a blow towards her leg, catching her assailant full in the face with a dropping knee.

"How do I get-" Hayate started to mutter, when he saw Kri get thrown against a wall from a particularly harsh blow. Cursing under his breath, he ran between Leena's legs, racing towards the heavily armored fighter.

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"Here too?" Hiro muttered, crouched behind a wall. Gunfire erupted, bullets crashing one after another into the obstruction as he turned to Kou and Hiro. "You guys got any ideas?"

Lassic shook his head, looking past the human soldiers at Twixy, alone and unarmed against another neko carrying a great sword. "We need to get over there and help her, but how?" A bullet crashed into the wall immediately below his head, prompting Lassic to duck back under the wall or risk getting his head blown off.

"I think I might 'ave an idea, ya'll," Kou muttered, glancing at the soldiers during a break in the gunfire as they reloaded. While Kou talked, Hiro stood, firing off several rounds before diving back behind cover as their fire started anew. "What if one o' us acts as a decoy o' some sort and draws their fiah? The others ken use that openin' to help Twixy."

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Twixy ducked under a swing with a yowl, bouncing away with spritely speed. "Ah! Can't we talk about this? I don't want to fight!" Twixy yelped, tripping over a tiny lightpost, rolling head over heels. Her opponent's blade slammed into the ground, clipping some hairs from her tail.

"No! All rebel factions must be destroyed! In the name of the Queen of Nekosia!" With a cry, the unnamed soldier stabbed, catching the sleeve of Twixy's short top, pinning her to the wall.

"In the name of who?" Twixy yelped, tearing herself free from the stab, tackling the soldier to the ground. Straddling him, she set to work with her claws, ripping and slashing at whatever she could reach. The soldier was surprised at first, but he managed to grab her hands after several seconds, setting his foot against her stomach and thrusting. Twixy thudded against the wall, diving to the side. She shook her head, looking up at where she had been, the warrior's gauntleted fist pounding a hole in the wall. He toppled suddenly, grabbing at his ankle, where a certain man with a claymore stood, the claymore stabbed all the way to its hilt in the neko's foot.
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"Why don't you fight someone that knows what he's doing, sir?" Lassic muttered grimly, pulling his shining blade from the foot.

"Why you little- AAAH!!" The neko shouted, grabbing at his face as a plethora of explosions erupted, burning flesh and scattering blood. Hiro reloaded his gun, firing another barrage of bullets, singeing the flesh of the stunned neko even more. Lassic ran up the neko's arm as he tried to shield himself rom the blistering gunfire, throwing a kick at Hiro, who was safely out of range. The warrior felt something on his throat, reaching a hand for Lassic, but Twixy caught him in the shoulder with a roundhouse, smashing his arm against the wall. "GET OFF ME YOU LITT-" were the last words the overwhelmed fighter managed to say before Lassic's holy blade, Fragarach, pierced his jugular. Blood sprayed out in a crimson geyser, the neko's eyes closed slowly, peacefully, to know nothing more ever again.

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"Watch it!" Leena shouted, tackling Kri out of the way of yet another axe swipe. Most of the other assailants had been taken out already by Leena, but there was little either she or Kri could do against the knight's heavy armor.

"Can't you use your magic to get it off him?" Kri shouted, blocking another slash.

"It takes time to cast!" Leena countered defensively, throwing a kick at his head. Kri opened her mouth to retort but stopped, seeing something small climbing up the steel armor. She blocked the ax, pinning it to the ground under her foot. Leena glanced at Kri curiously, having seen the small thing as well. The knight shook his axe furiously, sending Kri careening to the floor as he raised it high over his head.

It never swung down.

The knight coughed, trying to lift his visor, suffocating on what sounded like his own blood. With a final cough, a clot of blood dribbled from his mouth just as he managed to raise his visor, falling back.

Hayate crawled out from under his helmet, covered in blood. He shook his head in disgust, trying to clean his bloodstained hair. "Sorry it took me so long to get over here. I got lost."
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Comments: 50

JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-21 02:40:26 +0000 UTC]

Me: nearly a crush scene at the begining. and were would a guy like me with no fighting power fit into this world? all I got is my wit's and ring. if I brought in my characters. I could be a chessmaster. but if not. I'm doomed.

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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-21 10:31:25 +0000 UTC]

You wouldn't fit into it. You'd be dead.

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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-21 15:15:08 +0000 UTC]

Me: well with my new bio thing sent to you. what do you think my chances would be now?

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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-22 06:01:24 +0000 UTC]

1% chance of survival.

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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-22 22:37:43 +0000 UTC]

Me: -_-# your not being serious are you? did you even look up my journal to see what it does? i'm not going to be easy with all my stuff on. not for anyone.

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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-22 22:43:25 +0000 UTC]

*giggles* Except for their special abilities, (and Hiro, cuz he came directly from another planet) this is a medieval story, so your infinite ammo guns (which I wouldn't put as limitless anyway, because that's Gary Stu-ing right there.) and your grenades aren't there.

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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-22 22:50:14 +0000 UTC]

Me: I don't HAVE infinte ammo guns. I have potions that allow me to breath fire, lazers, lightning, and coldfire, as well as grow to 20 time's my normal size for 2 days. and hit with the force of a 500 foot tall giant. run on air, ground and water at mach5. and is immune to illusions and all forms of mind control. and I have a magic backpack storing an entire dementionfull of other stuff as well. I forgot to add that harmful magic won't hurt me either. due to wearing in addition to my ring, a anti-magic belt that negates all harmfull magic in and around the wearer. so I can't cast spells. but no harmful magic will be able to hurt me. and I have again a-near infinite supply in my backpack. and only power is to summon it at will. I never said anything about guns or such. and like hiro. i'm from another world. it all should fit in.

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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-22 22:52:51 +0000 UTC]

That's still way too many bonuses for me to give you. At most I could give you like...three things, to keep it fair. And according to your journal, you do have infinite ammo guns.

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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-22 22:57:10 +0000 UTC]

*sign* clothes of super-giant strength, the backpack holding my potions and back up rings and clothes. and ring of invincability. that okay? and it's only inffinete due to baing plasma firing. which is not ammo. and the fact that in felarya is stinking rich in magic, to be converted into Pisonic power. so it only is infinite in felarya.

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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-22 23:03:16 +0000 UTC]

No ring of invincibility. Everything else is ok, but pick something besides the ring. Sorry. Clothes of super strength are OK though.

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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-22 23:05:33 +0000 UTC]

Me: -_-; got it. super-sonic sneakers then. that seem fair?

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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-22 23:08:14 +0000 UTC]

Yup! That's good for me ^^ Sorry, ring of invincibility is much too powerful To me at least.

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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-22 23:11:21 +0000 UTC]

Me: just don't forget that the backpack holds nearly limitless amounts of replacements. and could I ask when I'll enter the story? call the character me, joesph okay? ^-^

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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-22 23:17:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm not 100% sure. It depends on which team you join; Jyp's (the rebels) The Queen's (Imperial) or Kri (renegade).

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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-22 23:20:28 +0000 UTC]

Me: can I be one of your companions? that would make me one of kri's group right?

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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-22 23:25:27 +0000 UTC]

You'd be in Kri's group, yes ^^ Though I'm still unsure which group I'll actually be in *points out the fact that he starts out alone except for Kara.*

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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-22 23:29:21 +0000 UTC]

Me: *notices* uh oh. maybe I could start out in my introduction saving some of the characters? like by busting through a wall or somthing to pulverize an enemy about to kill kri? I can kill a giant or giantess in one attack due to my punch or kick being identical to that of a 500 foot tall giant. and no one seems anywhere near that range, in size. so obliteration for the win!

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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-22 23:31:41 +0000 UTC]

*sweatdrop* I'm gonna hafta nerf your powers for you. You seem to lack the concept of moderation.

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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-22 23:32:59 +0000 UTC]

Me: a super giant is very strong. I guess I could change to just giants strength.

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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-22 23:39:22 +0000 UTC]

Please. Unfortunately, I rather dislike writing about over powered characters.

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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-22 23:43:34 +0000 UTC]

Me: how about he can only pulverize a giant if he's running at mach five with his giant strength? like the entry scene? he fights with the colthing of a giants strength normally. but when he builds up speed with the sneakers. he can do the pulverise in one attack move. does that seem a bit better? it would mean I'd be limited a lot more. does that seem fair?

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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-22 23:56:54 +0000 UTC]

I'll need to think about it more, as well as install some sort of limiter on your giant strength clothes and super speed sneakers.

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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-23 00:05:01 +0000 UTC]

Me: I'll change it to giants strength, and the sneakers can't move if they are stuck in glue or a booby trap. that help? and the clothing can be damaged. if I lose any of it, i'd pulverize the unprotected/giant strengthened parts if I tryed using them. so if I lose my shirt. I'd lose my ability to fight, cuz my torso would be pulverized if I tryed to kick with the giant strength still given me by my pant's and such. that make any sense?

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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-23 00:10:31 +0000 UTC]

*nod nod* Just add in the fact that if you lose any part of your giants strength and you can't use your sneakers or the G'force will wreak havoc on your intestines, and that sounds good.

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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-23 00:13:26 +0000 UTC]

Me: actually as long as i'm wearing the sneakers they toughen the body up to handle the mach speed. and are your not going to add all that in a bio of me for school style? i'm telling this to you so I can join in. but yeah. if the clothing is damaged. I'll need to replace it before I can go back to fighting.

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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-23 00:19:18 +0000 UTC]

Your supposed to be writing it down and sending it to me in a note o.o that's what everyone else did.

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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-23 00:20:41 +0000 UTC]

Me: but you know it already so do I really need to bother? and regarding notes. are we going to continue our RP on them that we halted?

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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-23 00:25:07 +0000 UTC]

Yes, you should, still. I will not allow favoritism. *even made his friends and submit a data sheet like that.* Sorry, but those are the rules!

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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-23 00:35:41 +0000 UTC]

Me: well I just submmited it. go read it now.

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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-23 00:42:18 +0000 UTC]

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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-23 00:43:08 +0000 UTC]

Me: did I say something funny?

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daimondstrike In reply to JoeyTheNeko [2010-02-23 00:47:07 +0000 UTC]

Um...yeah...

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JoeyTheNeko In reply to daimondstrike [2010-02-23 00:49:49 +0000 UTC]

Me: can you tell me what it was? and did you like it?

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neko-pet [2010-01-17 00:08:50 +0000 UTC]

wow, lots of blood and violance...I'd hate to be those guys that die, that's for sure...kinda a horrible way to go.

Great story all in all, I'm off to read the fourth chapter now ^^

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daimondstrike In reply to neko-pet [2010-01-17 07:43:53 +0000 UTC]

Well, it is a war. There HAS to be blood and violence in a war :3

My thanks!! If you spot any mistakes, please don't hesitate to let me know!

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neko-pet In reply to daimondstrike [2010-01-17 08:12:18 +0000 UTC]

don't think I ran accross any mistakes...if I did, I completely forgot about them. lol

You mean there can't be a war with flowers and rainbows? Damn. lol j/k

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daimondstrike In reply to neko-pet [2010-01-17 08:19:25 +0000 UTC]

:3
You, rainbow, and you, flower, ATTACK!!!
* just floats in the air.*
* grows one inch.* I has lost!

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neko-pet In reply to daimondstrike [2010-01-17 08:26:21 +0000 UTC]

rofl

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daimondstrike In reply to neko-pet [2010-01-17 08:53:57 +0000 UTC]

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Indiewayne [2010-01-10 12:36:27 +0000 UTC]

Aha!
The plot thickens.

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ChillFlame [2010-01-09 23:48:41 +0000 UTC]

O my that is not very nice but my little hero Lassic came to my aid. *huggles *

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Lassic In reply to ChillFlame [2010-01-09 23:57:00 +0000 UTC]

o.o your kindness nearly makes me faint, my dear ^^' i will do my best to always help you, wherever i can

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ChillFlame In reply to Lassic [2010-01-11 04:42:17 +0000 UTC]

Yeah you protect me ^_^

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Lassic In reply to ChillFlame [2010-01-11 13:31:08 +0000 UTC]

anytime, my dear... my life to you

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Krisexy26 [2010-01-09 22:48:52 +0000 UTC]

nice story again!

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daimondstrike In reply to Krisexy26 [2010-01-09 22:52:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks :3 I'm trying to fit vore scenes in, but it just didn't seem to fit in with the story. I'm sorry.

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Krisexy26 In reply to daimondstrike [2010-01-09 22:55:07 +0000 UTC]

its okay

as soon as i dont die...

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daimondstrike In reply to Krisexy26 [2010-01-09 22:59:35 +0000 UTC]

lol. Sorry, sorry. Maybe I overdid it on the danger here.

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Lassic [2010-01-09 22:46:37 +0000 UTC]

ha, there you go! no one's going to hurt my dearest Twixy! ^^

thanks again for including me

it seems to me you're doing pretty well at writing action scenes

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daimondstrike In reply to Lassic [2010-01-09 22:50:38 +0000 UTC]

Rawr! Show that evil, evil neko who's boss!

I'm glad you're liking it so much. I'm distinctly honored to have your praise ^^

I try my best to write action scenes XD I was actually listening to Linkin Park while writing these fight scenes, so maybe that's why I did so well. Maybe I shoulda named the chapter 'Faint' instead of 'The Fire Still Burns' :3 Now if only I could write vore scenes half as well...

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