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"Ugh...the hell?!" Anna recoiled, feeling something prick each of her fingers in rapid succession. The injuries weren't bad, but the speed she got them was more then a little discomfiting. "What the hell was that!?"Hiro couldn't answer her, and Anna temporarily forgot about her vendetta with Hiro, watching as a figure stepped out from the broken door. "I guess it's a good thing I woke up a few minutes ago..." the person drawled, a bloodied rapier in his hand. "If I woke up to that bashing, chances are I'd have had quite a bad day..." The catboy, wearing a short sleeved black tunic and loose black jeans, coupled with a bright red collar around his neck, looked to have been asleep, his eyes rimmed with red. His ears and tail were pure black, standing out against his shock of white hair.
"Uh...who are you?" Hiro asked after a short silence, the newcomer staring at Anna blankly.
"Oh, me? I'm Hayate! What is THAT?" He asked pointing at Anna, who seemed taken-aback. "I must say, it's my first time seeing an animal as large as that thing."
"THING!?!? WHO THE HELL ARE YOU CALLINGA THING!?" Anna shouted, her face livid with fury. "I'M NOT A GODDAMN THING! I'M A NAGA! I'M A GODFORSAKEN NAGA!!"
"So you admit you are a monster?" Hayate tilted his head to the side curiously, rushing Anna before his words even had a chance to register, examining her body curiously and shooting questions nearly unintelligibly.. "Bytheway,what'sanaga? Whatdoyoueat?Doallnagasgrowtobethissize,orareyouaspecialcase??"
Before either stunned naga or shocked neko could do anything, Hayate had brushed past them, looking all around curiously. "What the, what happened to our home? It's a dump! It wasn't like this before, how'd this happen?" Anna and Hiro just watched as Hayate stared at one of the doors leading outside, lying on the ground completely shattered. "There's so much forest...where am I? This isn't Joren..."
"It's called Frelarya...it's a seperate dimension from Joren...how long have you been asleep?" Hiro wondered, confused. "Um, what happened to you?"
"Frelarya? Really..." He tapped his chin curiously staring at the sky, where a dark form flew overhead. He turned around snapping his finger. "That reminds me, what were you two doing here in the first place?"
Anna blinked for a few minutes blankly before turning to Hiro. "For some reason I feel like I forgot something..."
"Shock can do that to you," Hayate shrugged scratching his chin. Anna growled glaring at Hiro, but mostly due to the fact that she couldn't for the life of her remember what had got her so pissed off, she headed out the door, breaking the wall in the process and...rolled end over end down the pyramid, since the door was at the top.
Hayate and Hiro both watched as Anna screamed, before finally stopping, crashing facefirst into a boulder at the base. "...I think she'll be feeling that in the morning..."
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Comments: 4
Wolfy-Kitten [2008-09-14 22:01:40 +0000 UTC]
Okay, dude, that sucked. I mean, the story was great as usual, but wait until you have a little more next time please. I got all excited about having something with actual words to read since I finished all my manga I have at the moment, and then this little bitty story. lol
Well, like I said, it's a good continuation of the story, I'm just let down that its's so short.
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daimondstrike In reply to Wolfy-Kitten [2008-09-15 04:26:48 +0000 UTC]
gomen...i only had like 10 minutes to write something cuz class was starting soon...and...i still have writers block...
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Wolfy-Kitten In reply to daimondstrike [2008-09-15 23:27:58 +0000 UTC]
Still? Ah well, that's how it goes.
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daimondstrike In reply to Wolfy-Kitten [2008-09-16 15:59:07 +0000 UTC]
...ok, seriously, i only had like 10 minutes, and i figured that a short chapter is better then no chapter.
i'll try to make next months chapter longer =_=;
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