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Published: 2016-11-13 00:36:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 329; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 1
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'Galaxy within me'I know my body is small.
I know I just clumsy girl.
My body is fragile.
I even can't open bottle cap.
But inside there lies an endless galaxy. You can never imagine how beautiful it is.
Even my body is small and fragile, but my soul is as wide as galaxy. I'm strong inside.
And you can never imagine how the power of galaxy works.
Decide to retouch it and make the better version
And I love this one <33
-Watercolor on Acrylic pad 280 gsm-
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Comments: 4
Hello there, I hope this critique is helpful! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
The first thing I would like to say is that I really love the textures and colors you have used. The texture and layering of color in the background is really lovely and beautiful. I also love the details and sparkles you added, it really works with the mood of the drawing.
I also really like the simple shading on the hair and the splashes of galaxy on the girl's dress, it works really nicely. The pattern on the interior of her dress is also a lovely touch.
When it comes to critiquing I don't have much to say, except the big stars are a bit blurry and I think if they had sharper edges they could work a lot nicer with the drawing and it would have a nice contrast with the softness of the rest of the drawing. I also must say the large watermark is very distracting to me and it really takes away from the experience, and perhaps using a smaller watermark or placing it differently would bring out your art better, however I understand why you placed it there. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Overall, lovely work! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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There's nothing wrong with this artwork. To me it looks beautiful. Even Though the no toes and fingers bother me a little it honestly doesn't matter. I love the lineart of this, it's beautifully inked and I love the dress and hair. I really love the way you painted the background. The different shades of purple and blue because it blends in perfectly. it's so beautiful, and the stars are well made.I also love the poem you wrote, it's really cute and fits well in this drawing.
Overall this drawing is really great, keep up the good work and have a nice day.
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