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Published: 2009-07-23 19:36:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 1036; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 17
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Description "It shrouded itself with the garbs of a holy man. Stole a stead and road away." The man hunched over the wooden table. The coals from his pipe lit up with life when he sucked in a breath. Tangling smoke blew from his lips chapped and cut, "The creature came to the church, requesting sanctuary, shouting on the steps as it stumbled up. By then the robes had been torn and bloodied. When the priests opened the doors they couldn't believe their eyes, it was a devil, green in skin with eyes of gold. And here it was wailing a lament for fallen brothers. The good fathers took the beast in, after all, could the devil cry?" He leaned back in his seat and scratched his beard, "It still is up there, living within the walls of the monastery. I hear that it still owns the robes it had thieved, hides them away in the wall. And every second Sunday of March, after mass is done all is well, you can hear it yell. A bellowish shout filled with pain that is met in the sky with three others."

Donnie
Mikey
Raph
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Comments: 15

GemiDonnie [2009-07-29 13:32:41 +0000 UTC]

;__;

What happened? They aren't dead, or...? I am sorry for not understanding: but the picture is beautiful and the story is great. ^^

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anticia [2009-07-28 06:02:09 +0000 UTC]

Aww...
I can'T decide if I love it or hate it...
Love because it is written so beautifully (your styla amazes me more and more), love because he at least got ONE compassionate person to help him, but...another story when they are parted... ;___;
Yet, I wanna think since they live they DO have hope to meet again and find their own happyness... u____u

All in all really beautiful piece. And the picture as well. You gave back the mood very well and I really enjoy the colours.

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RaphsImzadhi [2009-07-24 12:09:36 +0000 UTC]

Lol, whenever I read the word "monk", I automatically think about "monkey"- dunno why ^^

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LunarLotis [2009-07-24 03:32:42 +0000 UTC]

So sad but I love it <3 nice job on the little story too ^_^

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GaaraNekoGF1 [2009-07-24 02:03:16 +0000 UTC]

D'aw....poor Leo ;.;

I love the idea...if it wasn't for the fact that no matter what I'm writing lately I hit a writers block after the third chapter I'd so totally ask you if I could write a story using that exert...

...Or maybe I'll just do it anyways and hope my brain doesn't fail epically. C':

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DarkClosure In reply to GaaraNekoGF1 [2009-07-24 07:41:07 +0000 UTC]

I say you should! XD

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GaaraNekoGF1 In reply to DarkClosure [2009-07-24 09:45:54 +0000 UTC]

Then I shall! ...eventually...

Unless you constantly beat my ass into doing not putting it off and remind me that there is such a word in the dictionary as "update".

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Jordancatgirl7 [2009-07-24 00:07:49 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting idea and it makes me wonder why Raph is all alone. Intense picture!

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DarkClosure In reply to Jordancatgirl7 [2009-07-24 00:33:40 +0000 UTC]

D= It's Leo. My Leo has gold eyes.

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Jordancatgirl7 In reply to DarkClosure [2009-07-24 18:15:09 +0000 UTC]

D= Oh goodness, forgive me! Then I wonder why *LEO* is seperated from the guys.

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Leticheecopae [2009-07-23 22:50:29 +0000 UTC]

Are you going to elaborate on the story at all? It sounds really interesting, and I love the pic. Great work!

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DarkClosure In reply to Leticheecopae [2009-07-24 00:34:18 +0000 UTC]

Nope, just a miner idea. I'm done with it, but if anyone else wants to do it they can, just remember it's LEO, nor Raph.

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Leticheecopae In reply to DarkClosure [2009-07-24 02:14:53 +0000 UTC]

Okay. May mess with it then if that's okay.

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HaddySkelly [2009-07-23 20:03:13 +0000 UTC]

Wow, excellent writing, great drawing, too. And I very honestly can't find the words to develope a constructive comment besides telling you they're both brilliant. Well done.

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DarkClosure In reply to HaddySkelly [2009-07-24 00:34:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. =3

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