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  • The Grand ASHWORTH Fortune: Volume 01, Chapter 01 - A Brand New Era

  • Format: Western, reading from LEFT to RIGHT


    Here's the next batch of pages to the first couple of chapters to the TGAF official web-manga! All fully revised from the original trial version sold via print media.

    Thanks for sharing with me your comments and feedback previously!

    I really like this Pin-Up! It's featuring a rare shot Stream in his Fortune Hunter Superstar days. Expect the unexpected my friends, even when you are very confident about climbing the tallest mountain you are bound to receive a few surprises! Still get a friend to help get you out of stick situations like these.

    The background was inspired from my trip to the Southern parts U.S. in Arizona and Texas (ala Grand Canyon) 2007. Awesome and beautiful place that was...


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    Comments: 43

    booglybear [2011-10-20 03:43:56 +0000 UTC]

    chap.3!! i'm excited!!!

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    AxionWolf [2009-03-15 09:45:57 +0000 UTC]

    umm, does expecting the unexpected make the unexpected expected?

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    Taxidermatitis [2008-07-06 13:46:14 +0000 UTC]

    Like every single page of art and your comic,this one is beautifully done and I admire you for such!

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    EliseBellatrix [2008-06-14 13:38:07 +0000 UTC]

    Well, what more can I say? I like it, Elson!

    Something that is very funny to me is when the people shout "It's Stream the superstar fortune hunter! He's gonna save the day!" Seems like if they had rehearsed before that phrases as well in the earlier pages! Only is missing a conductor for this choir! hahaha

    BTW, I think I've discovered something about your Gyro Shoes

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    FireFoxgirl [2008-06-14 03:44:17 +0000 UTC]

    I love the comic! Only I was hoping that Ruby was gonna take care of those bandits on her own....

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    KentaruZ [2008-06-14 02:10:57 +0000 UTC]

    haha, it is an incredible picture O.O the expressions are great x3 it is a wonderful worl o.o
    also all the pages are incredible x3

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    Foxy-Sierra [2008-06-13 23:55:47 +0000 UTC]

    Stream kicks arse >=3

    Awesome work! Love the action scenes and the emotions are very well done in the expressions!

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    NinjaHaku21 [2008-06-13 21:37:53 +0000 UTC]

    All right! Stream! He's so cool! This will inspire me for my gift to you! ^^

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    darkspeeds In reply to NinjaHaku21 [2008-06-14 03:14:02 +0000 UTC]

    Awesome, can't wait to check that out!

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    CCG [2008-06-13 21:29:19 +0000 UTC]

    My favourite part was Ruby coming to save the day, and when things started getting too rough, Stream comes in and just kicks ass. And Ruby cheering Donut up back there....it always put a smile on my face.^^ I really like this Pin-Up! It shows that Stream is always looking out for Ruby, no matter the situation. Sad to know what happens in a few pages though..

    That aside, your work is amazing like always! Keep it up!^^

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    darkspeeds In reply to CCG [2008-06-14 03:15:03 +0000 UTC]

    Those are some of my favourite scenes too. Ruby's smile, enthusiasm and determination really inspires me to no end. I wonder how Ashworth the Wombat will react to her? O.O

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    InfernotheHedgehog [2008-06-13 18:28:19 +0000 UTC]

    The comic is becoming more and more interesting!!! Keep it up!

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    missyuna [2008-06-13 17:03:04 +0000 UTC]

    awsome, I read the hole pages of yours so far, and they are gold!
    Can't wait too see more of your wonderful and yet exciting pages ^^

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    Backjack-Kitsune [2008-06-13 16:33:02 +0000 UTC]

    damn double ups any way exelent work on all of them new pages u really if i've already said this hit me with a hammer but a nack if anything for making them feel mortal and granting them some character points instead of saying they are the heros they never lose or struggle for better choice of words

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    Backjack-Kitsune [2008-06-13 16:23:16 +0000 UTC]

    great work on this all of what i read i need to remember to comby and get you pic nic fic some times cause you deserve on all your stuff

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    darkspeeds In reply to Backjack-Kitsune [2008-06-13 16:31:20 +0000 UTC]

    Cheers buddy I appreciate your feedback there. *thumbs up* ^^

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    Backjack-Kitsune In reply to darkspeeds [2008-06-13 17:30:15 +0000 UTC]

    no prob man

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    UzumakiSonic619 [2008-06-13 15:54:17 +0000 UTC]

    Your comics keep getting better and better each page. Awesome quality of the pictures also!

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    darkspeeds In reply to UzumakiSonic619 [2008-06-13 16:32:53 +0000 UTC]

    Thanks UzumakiSonic619! I'm really happy with the result of this drawing of Stream and Ruby! XD Those comic pages were drawn months ago! XD

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    UzumakiSonic619 In reply to darkspeeds [2008-06-13 16:38:05 +0000 UTC]

    Whoa. Months ago? You must've planned this out.

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    darkspeeds In reply to UzumakiSonic619 [2008-06-14 03:10:13 +0000 UTC]

    Of course.

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    UzumakiSonic619 In reply to darkspeeds [2008-06-14 03:16:13 +0000 UTC]

    That's how smart you are. If you were a video game character, I'd want you to Robert Garcia from Art of Fighting.

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    darkspeeds In reply to UzumakiSonic619 [2008-06-14 04:52:07 +0000 UTC]

    That was totally random! XXD I am practicing my Dragon kicks though...

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    UzumakiSonic619 In reply to darkspeeds [2008-06-14 18:07:52 +0000 UTC]

    And I should practice my Haohkens. Gotta be ready to be Ryo Sakazaki.

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    Mafalda-chan [2008-06-13 15:29:16 +0000 UTC]

    YEY RUBY! She's such a nice girl! Too bad she has such bad luck (but despite that, she just keeps smiling! ^^)

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    darkspeeds In reply to Mafalda-chan [2008-06-13 16:32:11 +0000 UTC]

    ... When she meets up with a wombat that is...

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    Mafalda-chan In reply to darkspeeds [2008-06-13 16:57:51 +0000 UTC]

    You DO realize that you just did a spoiler? (lol just kiddin' XD)

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    darkspeeds In reply to Mafalda-chan [2008-06-14 03:10:43 +0000 UTC]

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    darkspeeds In reply to Mafalda-chan [2008-06-13 16:31:53 +0000 UTC]

    Her luck is about to change soon enough Mafalda-chan.

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    HeadShot-X [2008-06-13 14:21:19 +0000 UTC]

    I thought the Vulture Boys were going to ram Ruby at the same time, but no, they reduced visibility.

    I loved to see Ruby kicking ass, even if it didn't last long. And Stream's so cool it's hard to believe he's a bad guy. (Or is he?)

    Could you pleas enlighten me about the use of these pin-ups?

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    darkspeeds In reply to HeadShot-X [2008-06-13 14:42:57 +0000 UTC]

    Pin-ups from what I've learnt are concept sketches published on manga that foresees a chapter. Sometimes the Pin-Up can be meaningful to the chapter or completely done just for fun.

    Yeah it's cool when Ruby kicks ass. Stream is mysterious as he comes... You'll only find out the truth behind the man when I have this series up and running successfully in the commercial world!

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    EliseBellatrix [2008-06-13 14:15:59 +0000 UTC]

    Hmmm Drawing a characters in perspective is difficult. Nice pin-up, Elson!

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    darkspeeds In reply to EliseBellatrix [2008-06-13 14:43:44 +0000 UTC]

    Thanks Isabel! Getting the perspectives right can take time to master and it's definitely worth it in the end! ^^

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    Amaranth-Pink [2008-06-13 14:12:16 +0000 UTC]

    Nice use of perspective o.o

    I love the previous pages, it's...epic win, to say the least. XD I really liked the way you portray the characters' expressions, especially with the money-giving scene But I gotta say my favorite panels are on page 32 (The second-to-last one. Stream looks awesome there *_*) and page 35 (The forth panel, Ruby's cheeky/encouraging smile). Nothing to critique here, I'm too awestruck. XD

    P.S.
    I apologize, you're going to kick my ass for this, but I'm sorta confused: Where exactly are Ruby and Stream going and why are they going there again?

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    darkspeeds In reply to Amaranth-Pink [2008-06-13 14:51:45 +0000 UTC]

    Cheers for the feedback on the chapter so far Amaranth-Pink! ^^ You included in your feedback the character expressions used and also the panels that narrate the story - I really appreciate that! ^_~

    Oh they're heading to the CLASS REGISTRATION building where Ruby will be applying a Fortune Hunting license to get herself into the WORLD QUEST (as explained on Page 09 [link] ). I'm glad you asked cuz others may have the same inquiry as you did. = )

    Please don't hesitate to ask more questions in future! *thumbs up*

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    TorisLaCroix [2008-06-13 14:02:29 +0000 UTC]

    nghệ thuαΊ­t rαΊ₯t tα»‘t !

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    VeroTheWolf [2008-06-13 14:01:05 +0000 UTC]

    And ... Stream saved ruby with courage,
    New adventures and new friends!..

    hah i never seen you getting better to draw every time ;3 - *
    I couldnt recist to favorite.. but its to fantastic

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    SoftKeychains [2008-06-13 13:54:59 +0000 UTC]

    oo...................
    OMGOSH, STREAM IS HOLDING HER HAND WITH EXTREMELY EASY!!!!!!
    That now made me truly doubt about his strenght...whatever!
    About the second chapter at all....letΒ΄s give in the same way that I told in the previous pin-up:

    - Best point: The part when the Vulture Boys smashed the ground! The effects there come truly unexpected! And also when they stroke with their blades could be felt all the tensity. So far one of my favourite pages of that chapter

    - Worst point: More again, nothing at all. I sucks in criticism, XD

    -The photo of the day: K.O Vulture Boys (Elson, you are mean!! Why did you show Stream kicking their asses????? XD)

    ThatΒ΄s all! Men, why I never can give a decent helping hand with a comment like you always did?? Sorry pal^^U
    Keep on!

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    darkspeeds In reply to SoftKeychains [2008-06-13 14:53:56 +0000 UTC]

    Thanks once again for your feedback! ^^

    That's alright if you can't find critique, there's bound to be others waiting to have a go at me with the opinions.

    Stream's strong as he looks, and that is why he got bonus experience points after defeating the Vulture Boys (I told him that and he didn't hesitate to try! XD)

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    Hisaki-Kun [2008-06-13 13:50:06 +0000 UTC]

    that wa sa good chapter

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    rodsofwolf [2008-06-13 13:48:34 +0000 UTC]

    this comic is funny but sweet wat u outline ur drawings in

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    darkspeeds In reply to rodsofwolf [2008-06-13 13:52:19 +0000 UTC]

    Pencil dude. No inks for the first couple of chapters. They were all sketched and outlined over with 2B pacers. The shading consisted of 2B-4B pencil leads for different textures and effects. *thumbs up*

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    rodsofwolf In reply to darkspeeds [2008-06-13 14:00:01 +0000 UTC]

    ooooooooooooh well im gonna have to get better just like you

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