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Published: 2010-01-22 10:12:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 108; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description look up, look down, look all around
prepare for the fight of your life
you will die theres no compromise
no matter as much as you try
your going to die

look up
you made a mistake
your a total fake
you crossed my path
you will feel my wrath

look down
you acted tought
you though it be enough
you gave it to me rough
be prepared to be stuffed

look all around
you'll never see it coming
as sudden as druming
when it comes time
i will arise

look up look down look all around
no matter where you look
because of the dignity you took
the time is near as you begin to fear

you can't run
you can't hide
you will not survive
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Comments: 6

NataliePsycho [2013-06-22 00:56:39 +0000 UTC]

The first line immediately made me think of this [This may ruin the song forever so be careful]: [link]

I really like it; reminds me of Hatebreed; Something like 'In Ashes They Shall Reap'. (:

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davewrite In reply to NataliePsycho [2013-06-26 02:11:25 +0000 UTC]

I should sue!!! XD. This was meant to be a heavy metal thing.

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trplegoddess [2010-12-13 03:09:52 +0000 UTC]

This is great!! Payback is a bitch! And usually people, when they know there is going to be retaliation, they watch their backs!! lol ... Great job!!

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Dont-Ask-N-Dont-Tell [2010-08-09 00:06:10 +0000 UTC]

I like it. ^_^

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davewrite In reply to Dont-Ask-N-Dont-Tell [2010-08-09 01:14:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. my first song ( NOT POEM! ) I'm proud of it! thanks for commenting!

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davewrite [2010-01-22 18:52:44 +0000 UTC]

its awsome

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