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daveyrocsmysocs — autumn dreams
Published: 2005-11-20 17:14:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 209; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description thumbing through these memories,
paper cuts and battered wings,
swimming in the tar of my stronger days,
dirty clothes and nicotine,
laughing through my brave concience,
turning flowers into flames,
hangnails and petty things,
medicated faces and drunks in strange places,
pressing petals to the ceiling,
making shapes in the sky,
scratching bug bites in the sun,
raining tears along my cheek,
these are some of my shards and pieces,
covered in rust and growing weeds.
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Comments: 6

mentis [2006-10-04 00:09:01 +0000 UTC]

this is a good poem with strong images, very nostalgic. it makes you think of someone sitting and going through an old photoalbum or scrapbook. very songish too.

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duckie2318 [2005-11-22 05:09:39 +0000 UTC]

oh wow

I alway enjoy reading ur work!

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to duckie2318 [2005-11-23 01:15:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you again

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jlconnell [2005-11-20 17:43:59 +0000 UTC]

thats good, i like it, flows great

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daveyrocsmysocs In reply to jlconnell [2005-11-20 19:04:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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jlconnell In reply to daveyrocsmysocs [2005-11-20 22:23:03 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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