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Published: 2005-10-29 06:46:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 36284; Favourites: 1247; Downloads: 305
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No one knows till they taste itNo one cares till they lose it
No one bleeds till they live it
No one wants to admit it
No one can be without it
No one truly lives till they feel it
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Comments: 337
Stereotypical, but true. And honestly, the people leaving comments like "just like all the other emo poems out there" never stop to think that maybe some people are thinking deeper than just the surface meaning. I like it.
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OHMAN. This is so original and special just like the other 6000000 Emo poems that are out there.
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i love it! <3 i have written something just like this. i really understand where your coming from,
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This makes no fucking sense. It's just you being a whiney little bitch. Go fucking kill yourself you emo scum.
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That's uncalled for. Asshole.
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I didn't write that comment. Some motherfucker hacked my account a while ago and sent a bunch of shit out.
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Oh, jeez. I'm sorry. I take back my comment then. Sorry!
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It's cool. You got some pretty good stuff in your gallery.
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Thanks! I try. Haha.
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Thank you so much for understanding my life. Thank you so much :')
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Your signature is totally me<3.
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I really like this. I m emo and cutter too. I stopped to doing it. I love this poem!
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look ive never writin anything harful to any one on dev art befor so try to forgive me but...really? i mean a least half of emos become emos to provide an excuse to not being another off the shelf barbie doll but really the only way to do that is to not live under a label and be yourself i mean this whole emo buisness has became such a trend that youre becoming thise comformist's that you hate so much. the other half consist of those who are extremly positive and become emo to what i would imagine be cool, because if yure so damn positive all the damn time than why live under a steriotype? define youre self! just be dave, or pete, or chris, why be emo if you enjoy life so much? my only conclusion is to be popular. the other people who call them selves "emos" are the ones who claim to have under gone some sort of tragic time in there life and collapse in various signs of weakness by surounding them selves with a dark outlook on life...well guess what? im pretty fucking sure its not helping youre fucking situation! i know everyone plas this card but, there are kids in africa who have to eat there own escrament in some cases. you think they can aford to be emo? try living in china, or africa, or in the middle east and try to be emo there. no disrespect im sorry for this in advance i just want some feed back, okay? looking forward ot the angry letters
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the feelings are very genuine.. one of the cruel facts in life..
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that's a really cute poem! no, you are not high (as far as i know), i said CUTE! ........you probably think im mentally ill or something now, but i was wondering, can i make a little feature of this on my facbook page?
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I don't like it. Go back to school and learn how to write correct sentences, using correct punctuation.
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Oh shut up and take your head out of your ass. It's a good poem. Comment on that, not grammar. Have a nice day and kindly go fuck yourself.
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Let's start with 'It's a good poem.'
So this is an objectively good poem? That is unable to be criticised and praised? Or, is it just one of those poems which is only able to be praised?
Pieces of 'art', cannot be 'objectively' good. If they are, they wouldn't be art, would they? Pieces of art are dependent upon independent interpretation. A poem can mean one thing to one, and then mean the exact opposite to another, and to assume that it simply means one thing, is to stop it being art. This applies, to opinions, also. With this wide range of interpretation, how is it logical to simply have one type of interpretation, and stop the other?
What is the point, of producing 'art', which then can only be praised? How are pieces of art meant to improve, if they don't have a share of both positive and negative comments? What is the point, of freedom of art and speech, if one can only praise? I seem to think that totalitarian regimes are quite well known for only allowing one viewpoint across.
It seems this has happened here.
Now, while you have the perfect right to critique my criticism, it is the aggressive and consistent negative reaction from you and others, which gives an impression of a biased view, and, also, an impression that while positive comments are allowed to overflow, negative comments are instantly rejected and surpressed.
'Oh shut up and take your head out of your ass.'
'It's a good poem.'
'...and kindly go fuck yourself.'
Are pieces of evidence for the above point, if needed.
As for the poem, it seems to have had very little effort put into it. Sentences are not written well, and little effort seems to have been put into it. What is it actually saying? Is there any concrete matter which can be grasped from it? No. Aside from being told that we need 'it' for the above reasons. Hardly a groundbreaking point, inspiring, emotional, point. It seems to be a type of poem, which attempts to say alot, by saying nothing at all.
Is that clear enough?
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i love...im emo...i cut...everything u said is true
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Just because you cut does not make you emo. That makes you a cutter.
Stupid stereotypes.
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