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Published: 2007-08-06 18:37:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 253; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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Please dont letme go on feeling
so empty. I
thought I could
make it, yea I
knew I could make
it.
And of course
your all I need.
and of course
your all i want.
but i feel so
lonely at night
when the lights
go out.
Dreams are like
my safe haven
from the world,
and as long as
your in them I
know i'm smiling.
And when the sun
shines through
the window I
know that this
is one more day
that I know
I can make it
through.
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Comments: 11
J181 [2007-08-22 07:41:11 +0000 UTC]
I love this piece. I can definitely relate to this.
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DefeatedThoughts In reply to J181 [2007-08-22 13:30:45 +0000 UTC]
thanks! >_<
and thank you for faving!
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ShadesXOfXGray [2007-08-17 15:32:57 +0000 UTC]
Omg its beautiful and I love it.
Seriously it made me tear up...xD
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DefeatedThoughts In reply to ShadesXOfXGray [2007-08-18 02:35:51 +0000 UTC]
awww..thanks! no one's ever said that my poems made them tear up before.
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ShadesXOfXGray In reply to DefeatedThoughts [2007-08-18 02:44:53 +0000 UTC]
Youre welcome.
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DefeatedThoughts In reply to oneXonMars [2007-08-06 23:04:09 +0000 UTC]
lol thanks? lol.
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oneXonMars In reply to DefeatedThoughts [2007-08-06 23:06:59 +0000 UTC]
Yeah that's right!!!!^_^
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DefeatedThoughts In reply to On-The-Sidelines [2007-08-06 19:48:16 +0000 UTC]
lol thanks. >_<
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On-The-Sidelines In reply to DefeatedThoughts [2007-08-06 19:59:47 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome ^^
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