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DefeatedThoughts β€” When the lights go out
Published: 2007-08-06 18:37:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 253; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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Description Please dont let
me go on feeling
so empty. I
thought I could
make it, yea I
knew I could make
it.

And of course
your all I need.
and of course
your all i want.
but i feel so
lonely at night
when the lights
go out.

Dreams are like
my safe haven
from the world,
and as long as
your in them I
know i'm smiling.

And when the sun
shines through
the window I
know that this
is one more day
that I know
I can make it
through.
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Comments: 11

J181 [2007-08-22 07:41:11 +0000 UTC]

I love this piece. I can definitely relate to this.

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to J181 [2007-08-22 13:30:45 +0000 UTC]

thanks! >_< and thank you for faving!

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ShadesXOfXGray [2007-08-17 15:32:57 +0000 UTC]

Omg its beautiful and I love it.
Seriously it made me tear up...xD

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to ShadesXOfXGray [2007-08-18 02:35:51 +0000 UTC]

awww..thanks! no one's ever said that my poems made them tear up before.

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ShadesXOfXGray In reply to DefeatedThoughts [2007-08-18 02:44:53 +0000 UTC]

Youre welcome.

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oneXonMars [2007-08-06 22:57:08 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!!!!!!I LOVE!!!!!!!^_^

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to oneXonMars [2007-08-06 23:04:09 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks? lol.

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oneXonMars In reply to DefeatedThoughts [2007-08-06 23:06:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah that's right!!!!^_^

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On-The-Sidelines [2007-08-06 19:40:42 +0000 UTC]

ItΒ΄s beautiful!

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DefeatedThoughts In reply to On-The-Sidelines [2007-08-06 19:48:16 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks. >_<

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On-The-Sidelines In reply to DefeatedThoughts [2007-08-06 19:59:47 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome ^^

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