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DespicableMe1 β€” Fool Me Once
Published: 2015-03-16 22:11:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 946; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 0
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Description Fool me once
I'll cut you twice.
Hurt me and
I'll kill you thrice.
If you can't be nice
Then away you should turn.
Little boys who play with fire
Get their fingers burned.
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tulerwen [2020-05-28 23:27:23 +0000 UTC]

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AussieDidge [2015-08-11 13:48:06 +0000 UTC]

Well, this makes no bones about what it’s trying to communicate.

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This takes on the tone of somebody’s who’s been jilted or abused in some way, but rather than completely lose the plot and perhaps get in trouble for it, they’re perfectly content to write these words of warning, a toxic reminder that β€œHell hath no fury.” Each line burns with a passionate rage, and its brevity is its strength as we’re left to wonder just what you are capable of as a person.

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Needless to say, this is one good piece of work. There was a strong rhythm in there while I read it, and it expresses so much without needing to go into detail. Could imagine a sequel to something like this, but in the meantime, keep it up!

*The feeling when your comment's longer than the poem itself...*

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DespicableMe1 In reply to AussieDidge [2015-08-11 14:04:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank You so much! And for the record, I love long comments. XD
Honestly, I feel bad sometimes for not worrying longer works but hey, as long as people enjoy them.

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AussieDidge In reply to DespicableMe1 [2015-08-11 14:11:00 +0000 UTC]

Hey, anything to get on your good side, especially after those fightin' words.

Seriously though, it deserved the praise. You're very welcome and all the best now!

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PastelSpace [2015-06-26 16:09:17 +0000 UTC]

I am crying cause it so beautiful.....

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DespicableMe1 In reply to PastelSpace [2015-06-26 22:07:42 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you liked it

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pearwood [2015-04-07 22:47:51 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes it works that way.Β  Sometimes they walk away unscathed and watch you burn in their fire.

SheDares sent me here.

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DespicableMe1 In reply to pearwood [2015-04-07 23:10:28 +0000 UTC]

Indeed they do

I'm glad she did

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pearwood In reply to DespicableMe1 [2015-04-07 23:13:32 +0000 UTC]

Jenny SheDares is a gem.

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Mossstripel [2015-03-30 03:13:50 +0000 UTC]

Love it!

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DespicableMe1 In reply to Mossstripel [2015-03-30 05:07:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Mossstripel In reply to DespicableMe1 [2015-03-31 01:24:17 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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demonrobber [2015-03-20 16:28:46 +0000 UTC]

Someone not to be messed with. I am all in favour of people getting what they deserve.

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DespicableMe1 In reply to demonrobber [2015-03-20 22:52:15 +0000 UTC]

Indeed. Karma certainly exists for a reason.

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belarusian [2015-03-18 01:02:43 +0000 UTC]

Ooohhhhh I like this

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DespicableMe1 In reply to belarusian [2015-03-18 01:25:43 +0000 UTC]

Good to hear

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InsanelyCute [2015-03-17 18:43:22 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

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DespicableMe1 In reply to InsanelyCute [2015-03-17 18:54:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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InsanelyCute In reply to DespicableMe1 [2015-03-17 20:42:42 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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PiritarisT [2015-03-17 16:22:26 +0000 UTC]

Great one

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DespicableMe1 In reply to PiritarisT [2015-03-17 16:25:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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PiritarisT In reply to DespicableMe1 [2015-03-18 14:40:59 +0000 UTC]

you're welcomeΒ 

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Symblystic [2015-03-17 06:23:56 +0000 UTC]

Nice! That's pretty intimidating.

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DespicableMe1 In reply to Symblystic [2015-03-17 11:03:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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SheDares [2015-03-17 00:15:32 +0000 UTC]

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DespicableMe1 In reply to SheDares [2015-03-17 00:20:55 +0000 UTC]

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Itsjustwordsreally [2015-03-16 22:14:59 +0000 UTC]

this should be something parents sing to their kids

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DespicableMe1 In reply to Itsjustwordsreally [2015-03-16 22:23:52 +0000 UTC]

Haha interesting

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sweetymimy22 [2015-03-16 22:14:14 +0000 UTC]

oh maann it seems to me y get hurted many time huhΒ  :/

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DespicableMe1 In reply to sweetymimy22 [2015-03-16 22:23:37 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes but we all do

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