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Published: 2011-09-11 21:14:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 12652; Favourites: 270; Downloads: 0
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Shiv. A master of the blade. Temptress of fire.Model: Brette
Copyright Destroy Inc 2011
(sorry for the delay in posting, something came up yesterday!)
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Concept is great and the model very fitting. Fire works very well, as does the background. The white lingerie & props is probably a conscience choice, but I would've gone for black or dark red probably, to enhance the dark feel of it. Then again, this does give a nice contrast with the background and makes the model a bit more like-able. Most importantly you kept it consistent.
Lighting is spot on, as well as your (post-process?) yellow highlight-shading on her body. Seems a bit out of place to put it on her right (your left) blade though, even if it was natural light. The way the flames look placed right now, is as if they are behind the subject which shouldn't leave such a yellow highlight on said blade.
Great pose and composition, not completely sure about the cut. I might've chosen a square cut that ends just above her right knee and starts a little lower (nearer her head). Still it works very well and feels very balanced.
In short, another great work by you... probably not your best... but as always: AMAZING.
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Beautiful composition, and the flames work wonderfully as well!
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love it, great job.. remember to post it in the group
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