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scrap - tomorrow.still, pls, comment!(no "sweet", "cute" etc. comments please!!!)
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SLPdomain [2009-05-20 23:13:35 +0000 UTC]
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i think this is a very interesting composition.
I like the subtle profile of her...the mystery of her id.
the composition is very well balanced.
the monochrome hues are right on...but i feel troubled by the tone of her skin---if--maybe the flesh were more even toned with the hint of her profile and the profile were more enhanced---perhaps it would create a more fluid flow.
less red--more yellow--
again---this is just my own POV.
bring out the face --alittle --slightly more--and the tone of the skin--warmer.
otherwise--this is a really sensual and mysterious portrait.
the black and wooden element ...and her hair and lines of body--perfect.
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devllaa In reply to SLPdomain [2009-05-21 17:23:12 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much for your thoughts! i'll try a version using your advices
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nazag In reply to devllaa [2009-05-21 17:49:09 +0000 UTC]
yes and inspired from a beautiful photograph.
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devllaa In reply to EeehOoops [2009-05-21 17:27:09 +0000 UTC]
ce sa vezi, copilas? in intuneric e mufa mea scrintita
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EeehOoops In reply to devllaa [2009-05-21 17:33:43 +0000 UTC]
mi-ar fi placut sa vad poza, ca te pricepi chiar bine la artistic nudes-uri. daaar am sa ma uit peste 5 luni, ca atunci am sa pot sa vad
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devllaa In reply to EeehOoops [2009-05-21 17:58:49 +0000 UTC]
aaa am inteles da'mi un id de mess si le vezi inainte de termen
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oblomovg [2009-05-21 09:06:40 +0000 UTC]
Sweet! Cute! Beautiful!
No, actually it's quite okay. Compared to the early works, meaning "the sin"( cause from now on people will always compare your works with the "sin"), it's not that shiny, it doesn't poke your eyes with all sorts of photographic techniques. Oh yeah, realized now it's a bit of morgana, a bit of mysterious side, no somber emotion, and i don't see it sensual as well. It's a bit of the what the hell am i trying to do with a bit of i don't have any inspiration and with a little bit more of you. I feel like it's too wide. Try and focus it on the model alone, and see what it looks like.
Don't know if any of the above made any sense.
To me it didn't.
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peachm [2009-05-20 21:57:25 +0000 UTC]
love the deep dark colour, models location...adds movement.
like the suttle light on face.
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Gooregan In reply to Phoenix-88 [2010-01-16 19:03:40 +0000 UTC]
I have to admit, I had the same wish to write "sweet" and "cute".
The picture isnΒ΄t cute, though, itΒ΄s well done and rather scary than sweet.
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Mayfair710 [2009-05-20 21:41:59 +0000 UTC]
mysterious and inviting...it has that 'come hither' feel to it
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devllaa In reply to Mayfair710 [2009-05-20 21:48:48 +0000 UTC]
thank you, M., for your comment! as always, your words are very thoughtful.
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octav-chelaru In reply to devllaa [2009-05-20 21:36:39 +0000 UTC]
ai o galerie superba !
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octav-chelaru In reply to devllaa [2009-05-21 11:50:23 +0000 UTC]
as putea sa ma uit ore intregi la pozele tale...din pacate nu am timp, ca toata lumea si trebuie sa vad multe , dar ale tale transmit atatea...am impresia ca te-ai nascut cu camera in mana, daca nu e prea deplasata expresia
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devllaa In reply to octav-chelaru [2009-05-21 17:26:07 +0000 UTC]
iti multumesc f mult pt cuvintele acestea! inseamna enorm pt o fricoasa ca mine
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octav-chelaru In reply to devllaa [2009-05-21 18:57:41 +0000 UTC]
si eu care credeam ca am spus ceva nepotrivit...ma bucur dar sa stii ca le meriti din plin (cuvintele mele)oricum spun prea putine si eu cred ca esti sensibila si nu fricoasa, realizarile tale sunt deosebite si se vede ca-ti place ceaa ce faci,mi-a placut foarte mult prezentarea ta ca artist, este foarte originala si are un parfum aparte, sunt impresionat
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octav-chelaru In reply to devllaa [2009-05-21 19:12:48 +0000 UTC]
cu mare placere, si abia astept urmatoarele lucrari te apreciez foarte mult
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devllaa In reply to octav-chelaru [2009-05-21 19:28:45 +0000 UTC]
sincer, si eu abia astept urmatoarele lucrari
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octav-chelaru In reply to devllaa [2009-05-21 19:31:08 +0000 UTC]
te cred si pana atunci le voi admira pe celelalte, sunt ca o cura de sanatate intr-o lume bolnava
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octav-chelaru In reply to devllaa [2009-05-21 20:26:48 +0000 UTC]
iti multumesc ca faci lumea mai buna si mai frumoasa si esti de partea armoniei caci natura tinde spre frumos si perfect si asta realizezi si tu
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octav-chelaru In reply to devllaa [2009-05-21 21:22:21 +0000 UTC]
eu stiu ce am vazut din munca ta si de aceea stiu ca esti deosebita si cred ca ai sa continui cu succes ceea ce ai inceput si ma bucur foarte mult ca te-am intalnit nu pot decat sa apreciez pe cei care au facut deviantul posibil si-l mentin , esti minunata
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