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Dex91 β My OC Khayos in Anime Style (First try)
Published: 2009-06-11 21:38:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 5576; Favourites: 598; Downloads: 77
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If you LIKE this OC please feel free to give a LOOK to my GALLERY, there's A LOT MORE about him
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I tried to draw my Original Character in anime style!
Hope you like it <3
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Grazie mille!
Il mio stile attuale credo sia decisamente migliore di questo vecchio lavoro, e molto piΓΉ maturo e realistico, perciΓ² come stile terrΓ² e svilupperΓ² quello che hai potuto vedere nel mio primo capitolo di mark of darkness.
Se ti interessa qui c'Γ¨ l'unica versione in italiano di mark of darkness, con il primo capitolo completo in due parti, una piΓΉ vecchia in stile manga e quella molto piΓΉ recente colorata e con il nuovo formato verticale.
A breve uscirΓ la prima parte del capitolo due, se ti Γ¨ piaciuto sentiti libera di passare in giro il link e darmi una mano a spargere la voce su questo fumetto a cui sto lavorando duramente!
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I have to say you have some skill to be able to draw like this
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I can't believe this was a first try! It's incredible! Either you need to teach me how you did this, or I must commission you, because I'd really love to see some of my OCs as professional-looking anime characters.
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I told you I'd give you something in exchange for watching me, didn't I? Well, here you go!
So this is your OC, eh? He's certainly got it made in the looks department, and for a first attempt at anime, it's pretty darn good. The facial features are rather hawkish, and the hair is nice and sleek, as are the arms, and I can tell he has some muscles going for him. Oh, and the nose and eyes? They are simply beautiful and piercing, the sort that stares right into your soul and keeps your attention riveted on the face, never allowing you to look away. Interesting; very interesting indeed. Not too bad on the background, either. You don't need a fancy background to make a pic work for you. Well done indeed.
If I may offer some constructive criticism, Dex looks a little bit too much like Riku from Kingdom Hearts. You may want to take a look at that series if you aren't familiar with it to see what I mean (there actually are people who aren't familiar with KH, believe it or not). Also (no offense), I understand if you've lived with this OC for so long, but the name Dex makes me think of the character from the Mega Man Battlenetwork series. Don't get me wrong, I love that series, but I don't like to associate a character with another character when I look at one.
Sadly, despite my enjoyment of this character, I can't add him to my list (that is to say I can't add him to my favorites). It's not that I dislike him, mind you-he is an interesting character, as I read his background story as well-but the name just doesn't click with me, and again, he reminds me too much of Riku. If the name were different and he looked a little more unique, I might, but alas... Still, I must give you props for taking him this far and working on a game for him! Congratulations on that! I could never do that. I'm so computer illiterate it almost hurts!
Well done. Keep building this character and make that game! You rock.
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Thank you very much for your criticism!
You critiqued an outdated versione of Dex though, feel free to give a look to the new one and comment on it if you feel like doing it
(He clearly has a different hairstyle than riku, who has longer hair and they are pretty much towards the violet/blue rather than pure white)
Also, his name can't be changed, because it has a particoular meaning.
If you write only Dex here on the search bar, my character comes up, and that's good enough for me.
Also, i can't listen to everyone who asks me to change the name.. i of course accept your critique, but its too personal, i can't change the name just because of that.
It's nearly impossible to come up with something which hasn't been invented yet, so thank you for your suggestion but i'm fine with his name^^
I'm trying my best to design Dex as a unique and appealing character, he is still evolving but i like what i'm getting so far.. feel free to follow his development, because there's still a lot to do, design-wise!
Thank you once again for your kind words and constructive critique
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this looks so awesome!!! just like anime!!!!
your OC looks so cool XD
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He sort of looks like an Akatsuki member.
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*shrugs* must be the black suit xD
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Thank you!
If you like my works feel free to watch me so that you can see more in the future!
Also, I don't know if you noticed, but i founded an official Mark-Of-Darkness Group, feel free to join as a member/watch if you like the saga i'm developing!
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Welcome! 
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Thank you, really!
I don't know if you noticed, but i founded an official Mark-Of-Darkness Group, feel free to join as a member/watch if you like the saga i'm developing!
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Thank you!
If you like my OC or my art feel free to watch me so that you can see more in the future!
Also, I don't know if you noticed, but i founded an official Mark-Of-Darkness Group, feel free to join as a member/watch if you like the saga i'm developing!
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you're welcome ^--^
I will! :3
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I think this has potential of being an awesome anime, what's that spot on the back of his head ? o.O
I love it D:
(Continua cosi che hai potenziale!!!)
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Thank you, really!
You mean the little lock of hair on the back of his head? xD
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Yes,It looks a bit strange :/
Coordinates (X;Y) (25;465)
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Oh, you mean that little spot on the lineart!
Well, probably it's my bad, didn't see it when i cleared the lineart xD
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Thankieees!!
Feel free to watch me if you like this and want to see more of my art in the future!
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Awww, thankiees!
Feel free to watch me if you want to see more of my future works
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No problem, you are welcome.
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Thank you, really!
Feel free to watch me if you want to see more future works
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