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charlemagne [2004-09-10 06:33:26 +0000 UTC]

I would recommend a few things. First, try and remove the noise and scratches on the image, as it tends to draw attantion away from the overall image. The lines of ice/energy running from the logo through the continents is good. Perhaps you could on a sumbliminal level match thier destination with actual cities as represented on a real map.

The logo feels out of place. Mostly because it's the stock colors and texture. Try making the texture fuller and relating to ice. If your ice-based continents are going to sat the green/blue tone they are, perhaps go for a snow white or ice logo. Make the fragmented square from the "L of the logo unique from the rest of the logo, not only in style but color but still matching the overall ice theme. Perhaps it could be like black ice, something that is barely noticeable but still identifiable. Also make the "digonal "V" over the Linspire name unique. Perhaps find if there is anything you would find in the ice packed regions that would resemble that shape and maybe even mold it to represent that etc. Sometimes brown and other earth colors mix wellwith Ice because they tend to balance it with a sens eof earth, nature. Pure ice doesn't go to well on the eye as it is bright and harsh.

I'm not 100% sure about the border. I think it should go in favour of a slightly transparent and fading/blending of a real scene or photograph of the continents like Antartica. So your border would be a faded yet recognizable scene from an area that has ice most of the year.

That's all I can think of right now, but however it goes, keep up the good work!

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