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Published: 2008-11-11 03:39:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 163; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Some more fun with scribbled lace. This was based off a doodle I drew during English while we were reading Poe's "Raven". So the title is Lady Lenore, but really its more inspired by the raven itself.Related content
Comments: 6
Nice pic. I love her hair and dress...and the way that, at some "transition" points, her "ghostly" nature becomes more obvious.
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Thank you =3! And thank you for the faves.
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It's a bit hard to critique the anatomy in this one (cloth conceals a lot), but from what I can see, there are a few minor issues.
The placement of the eyes is awkward and the forehead is a bit large.
The chin is rather square and angular which hints at a more masculine build.
The chest is too masculine. It was intended that the model have small breasts, but the model must also have more pronounced hips/waist to be considered feminine.
The figure's right forearm is drawn with curves that are concave in the same direction.
The left arm is confusing.
I don't know a lot about dresses.
:/
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Thanks for the detailed critique, as always. I admit I was rather lazy with this one and decided to just bluff it all with a big dress, but just goes to show there is no substitute for hard work XD
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well, i was being a bit nit picky
anyways, you ARE going in the right direction
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