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-Sorry, if I sound like a bitch, read to the end anyway...and keep in mind I have a LOT LOT LOT on my shoulder and mind right now... -
I don't care if his ear 'look better' like wolf ears, the breed has these kind of ears. =/
Double check his design it's just a tiny bit off but I'm anal about designs. o.o -still uses ref's for char's she's had for years-
I know I haven't made a breed sheet yet, and I know it doesn't seem like a big thing but don't make desicions like if they're poisonous or like flying or not, the whole species is based on flying bugs and they're supposed to be cheery chipper little flying guys that love bouncing around.
I tried not to show the 'males reproductive organ' because I felt it didn't need to be drawn. xD So it's a very sneaky little thing, like a duckie? 8D... -wants this to be for little little kids too-
the antenna are the bits on the end of his ears xD
This one bothers me quite a bit, his tail is not that long!! Think about the picture I showed you, his tail is shorter than his scarf.
I don't know what one of the little dots on his face was. o.o but there's supposed to be a tiny marking there, (zoom?) and his 'animal' eye is a royal blue colour, not black.
and the bottom but eye is smaller than the top but eye and the top bug eye is smaller than the animal eye.
(kinda like a weird little triangle thingie)
And this is the part that bugs me the most,
I take time to
a) Write a description/personality for him, If you don't like it, then don't take him.
B)To read your artist comments and notice you changed his personality/description.
That's a no no, it's just common courtesy to ask before making changes.
So just incase you forgot, here's how he is.
This fella is super furry and has a littlie 'mane' down his neck which he loves to spike up he has very short antenna and is very VERY clumsy, and because of that if he ever gets teased he gets very angry he often trips over his tail and scarf. He's actually fairly artistic and creative and pretty shy, but if a girl (or guy?) gets to know him he's an absolute hearthrob and easily addapts to each persons personality. He vents often so that makes it so he hardly has much to vent about. This guys wings are sort of a pearly purpley colour and aren't very shimmery but are slightly translucent he has slightly larger canine teeth for rip and tear. (NOM NOM NOM NOM) Humming birds like to steal his tail hairs :C
(he's about eleven inches long and eight and a half inches tall.)(Changes size, he's about the size of your average peice of paper now, I want the breed to actually be much much much smaller...)
Oh, and canine teeth are just four of the front teeth. xD (I think that's what they're called)
I pointed out everything I can think of, so sorry but I neeeeeedd to keep this breed pure or else I might get accused of stealing someone elses idea. x.x
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SweetLittleFilly [2009-08-04 22:37:24 +0000 UTC]
Kay first of all, Isn't he my character?
That's why I usually don't take characters that already have a personality and everything.
Second of all, it's hard to draw 'hair' on ms paint. O.o
Thirdly, I got rid of the whole venom thing,
Fourth, I never even drew his teeth, I said they were sharp, which canine teeth are
Fifth, I didn't even see any antennae on his ears. I just saw his ears.
And sixth, bug eyes don't get smaller as they go down the nose, bug eyes are all the same size.
Everything else - fine.
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Dissertation In reply to SweetLittleFilly [2009-08-04 23:28:30 +0000 UTC]
1. Yes, he is your character, but he's also my breed, and I'm trying to make it so that everyone's is unique, or at least the ones I make for them, because if I make these free to make to anyone I don't want there to easily be a chance that someone copies on of the originals. (Which Rykei is an original)
2. Just say it's hair o.o not feathers, I use ms paint too xD
3. The last time I checked you hadn't
4. I read your discription xD "he has canine-like teeth" or something along the lines, pointing out what teeth were canines to clarify any confusion (incase you want to draw him angry you know that they have randomly placed teeth)
5. The antennas are the 'lines' sticking out of them xP
and sixth it's MY breed, for all you know each set of eyes might have a unique responibility. c:
So actually, no they don't get smaller going down his nose, because they aren't /on/ the nose, they're pretty close together. But they do how bigger to smaller, once again, My breed and it's a breed trait, makes them look cuter. c:
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SweetLittleFilly In reply to Dissertation [2009-08-04 23:31:26 +0000 UTC]
All 'canine like' teeth are the same - four sharp teeth.
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Dissertation In reply to SweetLittleFilly [2009-08-04 23:34:12 +0000 UTC]
" His teeth are like canine teeth and are good for ripping apart meat."
Reading it from another persons point of view does it not sound like a mouth full of canine teeth? xP You can understand my dilema if so
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SweetLittleFilly In reply to Dissertation [2009-08-04 23:40:30 +0000 UTC]
Um, canines are the same in all dogs' mouths, like i already said, so when i say canine teeth most people would probably know what i mean - and canines look identicle to what you have drawn. C=
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Dissertation In reply to SweetLittleFilly [2009-08-04 23:46:13 +0000 UTC]
When I said canine teeth I was mention dog teeth, like a husky. o.o; "His teeth are like canine teeth "
could be easily reworded to "His canine teeth are" xD And then don't look identicle, I just drew triangles XD!!
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SweetLittleFilly In reply to Dissertation [2009-08-04 23:48:13 +0000 UTC]
Lol! I know they're just triangles but they're in the same places as canines are! xD
All canines are in those areas.
I'm sorry I'm being so much trouble. xD
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Dissertation In reply to SweetLittleFilly [2009-08-04 23:51:03 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I know that xD My mom used to be a vet assisstant thingie so she has all the anatomy books, PLUS I PLAY WITH MY DOGS MOUTH A LOT. XDD
HE HAS FLOPPY LIPS. 8D
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