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Monoelain [2013-06-29 08:37:03 +0000 UTC]

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the pose and general anatomy is okay, but there is a problem with perspective. the viewing angle of the sofa and the angle of the figure do not really match up. this can be fixed fairly easily by either hiding the line where the top half connects to the seat cushions with pillows (which would also fill in the empty space) or push the line down to match the figure.

your coloring needs work. it looks like you are using burn tool or smudge to shade. doing that makes it look blurry and dulls the color. Instead, pick out a pallette for color starting from lightest to darkest, and cel shade and then brush over the cels.

the color of the sofa is kind of distracting and the background is irrelevant.

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if this dosent make much sense please reply and i can clarify. (rated 2.5 everything because i dont like rating things in critiques, nothing personal)

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teennarutotails [2013-06-29 03:12:21 +0000 UTC]

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Its simplistic, though not bad, and the color seems to take away from the details instead of add to them. I would love to see something more unique and original, but the mature content should still remain because it seems to add something to the picture as a whole. There should probably be more going on in the background going outside the window instead of just a color, also maybe add details to the face so as to add some depth to the character. All in all this is a great piece of art and I'd love to see more.

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cybercorpsesnake [2013-07-20 12:53:23 +0000 UTC]

nice

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x--Pa1nt--x [2013-06-17 18:13:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh i cant see it

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KuroNetsuki [2013-06-17 17:51:52 +0000 UTC]

good work paying attention to all the little details, anatomy is good, the pose seems a bit stock-like, but that aside, it's very pleasant!

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