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Published: 2010-06-08 00:06:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 486; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 4
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Description it really should be
The Scream of the Swimming Pool
but there was not enough room for the the the the
never enough room for the the



the ravens reminded me

high above the devil's slot-car sideshows
where streets, sidewalks and metal containers
melt under the logic professed,
vultures prey on the garden reeds
while slashing through hydrants spurting geysers
washing the Bentley's leather seats
of the river's bed and the satellites return
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Comments: 7

Izaaaaa [2010-06-20 14:12:25 +0000 UTC]

it does scream
deep waters

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DocSonian In reply to Izaaaaa [2010-06-20 21:49:10 +0000 UTC]

where earth was
concrete took over,
water filled
rain soaked and left alone
like an old motel on the strip
a place Tom Waits or Charles Bukowski might have stayed in the 60s.
a place a murder may have happened

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thePARANOIDghost [2010-06-08 20:54:24 +0000 UTC]

pretty,fing sweet

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DocSonian In reply to thePARANOIDghost [2010-06-09 15:10:26 +0000 UTC]

thanksss.....the water was serious blue

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thePARANOIDghost In reply to DocSonian [2010-06-09 19:03:52 +0000 UTC]

you are very welcome

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fe-e [2010-06-08 01:01:24 +0000 UTC]

*construct the deconstruction....*

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DocSonian In reply to fe-e [2010-06-08 04:04:17 +0000 UTC]

this one is so far gone
one would have to go far out into the ocean to even see a fish

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