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DoodlesandDaydreams — SDLvsOrthuis: Pg6
Published: 2008-12-04 00:13:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 1331; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 15
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Final page!No Pi-roe didn't freak out because Orthius touched him. He freaked because Orthius slapped his sword wounds. Cut's make no sound and Jamie never said WHY they needed free health care. Don't worry, he'll be fine.
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Also here are some real horses showing off their mad jumping skills. [link]
Orthius Agatha (c)
SDL (C)
All others (c) me
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No thank you for making such amazing comics!
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Really glad you and your opponent worked something out to give you both extra time so no loss in quality (or at least that I saw). Very good.
Also love the link. It easy to forget horses can jump real high
Very beautifully done, I love her non-violent duel solutions (because it's true). Be interesting to see what will happen when she duels a pro violent person or group.
Her loss of balance in the one part was a nice way of showing she's not 'super' human, just human and even when you are in practice with balance stuffs you can still slip. Little things like that can be very hard to write cuz the temptation for you character to be the best/superhuman can be strong, but not realistic.
Already made a note on the text, it wasn't bad- and it did get easier to read in some parts then others. Pros and cons to had written text. Most importantly: it did not take away any enjoyment of the story.
Kinda like the beginning where you were trying to convey how he saw the world through sound, touch and smell.
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*standing ovation*
Awesome work on this duel, Doodles! It was funny, witty, and exciting without actually resorting to violence! (Not counting the last panel, of course. ^^) I thoroughly enjoyed reading this comic! It was a great match, and I hope you win! (Even if for some reason you don't, I'll still be counting this as canon to their storyline in my mind.)
That is quite impresive, Pi-Roe making that jump! I wouldn't have thought it possible except that he is a very large horse, and I have observed how great horses can jump. ^^ Poor Orthius, it is understandable that that would have freaked him out! XD one wrong move could have taken his head off!
And I think the little yellow guy sticking out of the corner yelling "Winner!" is funny.
Looking forward to seeing more of Jamie and Pi-Roe! 
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Thank you. Thank you. *bows repeatedly*
I was worried people would think a sports duel was lame, but you're comments have definitely put that worry to rest. If you want to see some cool jumpers I put a link in the comments box.
Awesome sauce, I love cameos!
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that was great! >W< Pi-roe's just too cute
I loved the whole thing, it was very creative making the match into a basketball game!
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Check the link in the comments box to see the real thing.
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